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This need more chapters.

What could go wrong?

The only reason the answer is not "everything" is because that would be too predictable.

I'd say this premise could work very well for a series of fluffy pieces. As it is, a very entertaining one-shot.

Discord folded his arms in indignation. “Well, I did try self-animated brooms, but they kept multiplying out of control.”

:pinkiesmile:

“And rabbits don’t?” Applejack droned.

:pinkiehappy:

Could do with being the start of a longer story though.

Discord could take some boat riding advice from Willy Wonka.

I really enjoyed this fic, barring one thing. Like others have said, this story feels as if could go on for some time; as it stands the fic doesn't end, it just sort of stops.

Still, nicely done, Sharpie.

:raritywink:

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It has been so long since I've seen that movie, I can't remember when, where or how I saw it. Definitely a classic. And watch out for General Specific, Sheep.

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I can't imagine how much time they put into rehearsing for that. Quite impressive.

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So… it just stops, like Wonka's boat ride? If it's good enough for him…

Seriously, I just couldn't come up with a better one. I tagged it Random for a reason.

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Sure, this could be continued, but to be honest, I don't think I could come up with enough ideas and it would just get repetitious. The story was inspired by a real-life experience I had, when I got stuck in place for ten minutes or so on a ride in a theme park that shall go unnamed, and had to endure the tortuous repetition of—well, you get the idea.

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The solution's easy, then. Go to Disneyland and get yourself trapped in a ride. Then come back and write another chapter.
:eeyup:

6357904 Logical answer is logical!

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I'll just leave this here...

:applecry:

Hah! That was hilarious, and the song is stuck in my head. :rainbowlaugh:

Hint for Discord: Hire Fluttershy to do the singing.

it said in an patronizing voice

*a

What a fun idea and fun fic! Discord clearly uses his home as an outlet for his chaotic tendencies, so no doubt he'd find something crazy to do with a larger amount of land at his disposal.

I would have liked to see more banter between the CMC though. Sweetie Belle is smart, but she almost acts a little too mature in this.

At least the title had only one "mad" and not four.

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