Follow the Rogue Steel Ranger as she fights to find out what happened to her Stable
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Whoa. You got quite a story going here. I can't believe I hadn't noticed it and given it a like before.
2048951 thank you
2048959 Don't mention it. Anyone with enough determination to put over 100k into a story deserves a thousand likes. I know what it's like to top 100k on a story, and it's a long and mildly-painful progress pumping out those long chapters.
But it's fun.
Finally another chapter woo! Also looks like Appletart will be joining Frosty in the leg replacement group. I know I'm a bad pony for linking someone else's work, sorry.
Might wanna get it edited again, saw some stuff in there that were misspellings of missing punctuation.
2049855 theres quite a few in the "leg replacement group" its going to be a jolly ol party.
but yes, great chapter!... and a hell of a way to end it too.
Oh good chapter really liked this one looking towards the next
Well at least they have another reason to go to Zeta
She had told me the ponies of Equeastria needed hope and she felt that the Krogoth could give them that hope if Ah went public.
Just an error there
2061977 where?
2062014 I think it was in chapter 17...... Or was it 18? can't remember, it was in Applejack's Journal scene
2062025 there hasn't been an Applejack's journal scene until that first on at the start of the last chapter. There has been a Blueberry Journal entry for 12.5 the was a lengthy description of the Krogoth
2062082 I meant At the start of this chapter where Aj is already inside the Stable
2062117 i think you miss read it, she said in her journal IF she went public but of course she couldn't as the bombs fell before she could
2062284 Errrrr ummmmm..... What i'm trying to say is the spelling error of Equestria
yay! another fun read! Complete with a leg sever.
2062326 Corrections made, I can't believe I didn't notice it, thanks for pointing it out
2071184 Glad you enjoyed it
Some one needs to do fan art of the baby and apple. I need my squees.
I am a terrible person for laughing at that.
I honestlylt out a gasp of worry when I saw the mention of the foal. I was glad to see that she was all right.
While the action is going along great and the characters are doing thr part to keep me invested, I tillhave two problems that are popping up. For one thing, in a sene where there are multiple people speaking, owership pronouns are a must. In the clinic I was having an impossible time catchig up with who was saying what to who and where. The second thing is the placement of the exposition. I don't mind the finding out of informatin or some good long talks aboutthe past, I just wish there was better ways to describe it. Like finding the journal entries or seeing them come onto the screen.
Everything else, I am fine thoughj. I love seeing a brighter outlook with Appletart when she held her foal. The way the Krogoth is being describe and its actions are turely terriffic