Follow the Rogue Steel Ranger as she fights to find out what happened to her Stable
Page generated in 0.018 seconds
Total duration
1,099 users online
1,622,229 hits today, 1,960,719 yesterday
My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic Fanfiction
Designed and coded by knighty & Xaquseg - © 2011-2024
Support us
SubStar
Chat!
Discord
Follow us
Twitter
MLP: Friendship is Magic® - © 2024 Hasbro Inc.®
Fimfiction is in no way affiliated with or endorsed by Hasbro Inc.®
hahahaah she dreamed of kissing him made my day , and not good at all there is nothing that can stop Krogoth unlike Liberty Prime its virtually un stoppable good chapter anyways
1361368 I'm glad you enjoyed the latest chapter.
This chapter would've been better if Appletart arrived, the Krogoth was still inactive and she and her group had to fight through the raiders. Krogoth comes online and wastes the Raiders, spares Appletart, CD, Skyfire and Zyon, dumps Motor Runner to the ground and proceeds to exit and begin its merry Exterminatus.
Krogoth's first stops should be Pre-war weapon depots, acquiring any intact pre-war weaponry.
1367618 No, I've always envisioned it so just as she arrives at the Hanger the machine is coming out.
Besides, like I said in the chapter the place was hidden by a Holographic wall so she couldn't see the entrance and it would have taken her a while to realise it was a Hologram.
Now that the machine is activate, Equestria is going to see a war like the one that destroyed it.
1368939 If there is one thing I would recommend, It would be to avoid mentioning places from the original FOE, since they were pretty much being harassed by the Enclave. Not to say you can't have the Enclave trying to fight the Krogoth, just think a little before you decide to send the Krogoth to do something like flatten New Appleloosa or Fillydelphia.
1369645 Don't worry those places won't be targeted just yet, i have other places in mind to draw the Krogoth's attention :3
1369833 I'm glad you enjoyed the chapter, the Krogoth is actually a she as it stole the mind of a mare.
This is going to go down in history as the most EPIC thing ever.
~Reggie
1372133 You really think so? Thank you kindly
Chapter 16 must come out soooooooon. but if not its ok. I can wait
1414433 please have paitence, i try to get a chapter out at least once a month
I know im being patient.
Although I'm reeeaaaallly looking forward to the fight. For some reason I'm more interested in the baby
The revelation of Motor's mistake was wonderfully done, very horror esque as you can feel the revulions and the horror that Motor Runner is starting to feel. I loved how the maching revealed its true intentions and I lovd the despari in the air as the failure hits Applejtart
Zeta really? SOOOUUUNNNDSS ALOT LIKEA STORY I KNOW HMMMMMMM
8390365
keep in mind this was writen long before Influx
Not trying to be a grammar nazi but there is a lot of grammar errors that sometimes makes things a bit confusing but over all I’m enjoying the story so far.
9321405
this story is entirely raw