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Applebloom discovers shocking truths about her family when a school project sends her searching in the town records. How could her mother have died ten months before she was born?
Sometimes the greatest sadness blossoms the greatest joy.
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...Because horses haveelevenmonth pregnancies?I'm sorry, but knowing that bit of biology, that bit of the description was a bit funny to me.Still, might want to do a slight tweak on that.Never mind, I'm an idiot that can't brain today.
Good premise, but the dialogue seems a little monotone and choppy.
Wasn't expecting another Applejack is Apple Bloom's mother fic, though having Apple Bloom's father be Mr. Cake is a surprising twist.
If my sister did that I'd be all like: "Hold up. What? What? WHAT? WHO'S MY FATHER WHERE AM I IS THIS A DREAM I DON'T BELIEVE THIS!" Then I would faint.
Scootaloo would make the worst lady in waiting ever, I doubt her needlepoint would be up to snuff!
Also, if Pinkie is Applebloom's godmother, one of the traditional duties of the godparent is to help ensure their godchild is taught proper religious traditions (hence the "god" part). Will Pinkie teach Applebloom her religious traditions? All of them?
6314981 That's an excellent question. We will just have to wait and see.
6572322 Ha! I couldn't make this a Halloween story, but I want to write one now.
Huh, is this fic complete? Because it's marked as incomplete, despite there being an epilogue.
Idea for a bonus chapter, Cup Cake's inner monologue upon her husband's revelation.
6593301 i like it that
6593099 i am wondering that too
6593099 I forgot to update that. Thanks for the reminder.
6593301 That is a good idea, but it would be difficult to execute well. At least it would be difficult for me to do it. I would like to move on to other stories. My next story should be a Flutter Dash one.
6596108 ok
What a great follow up. I love Rarity secretly conducting Apple Bloom's Celestian Briss, or whatever it's called.
6599403 Actually, The Mayor conducted the ceremony. Rarity was there as a witness. I didn't give the ceremony a name.
Celestian Briss LOL
are going to make part 2 of this story?
6599953 No, but I will reference Applejack being Applebloom's mother in a couple of stories I have planned.
