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Daxn


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This is the colabs "Sick", "Relief", and "Therapy" turned into a fanfic, isn't it? :twilightoops:

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Yes. The aforementioned shall be deleted soon.

6417446 Are you going to be doing this for all colab entries that get complied into fanfics?

Daxn #4 · Sep 12th, 2015 · · 1 ·

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Yes, I will.

Google was no help, so could someone please explain to me what EHIS means?

Daxn #6 · Sep 12th, 2015 · · 2 ·

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I did not leave behind the expanded acronyme? Well, that explains part of the downvotes.

It's supposed to be "Early Heat Immunitary Syndrome", but maybe it could be named in a more technical way.

6417758 I think the majority of the downvotes are because this is a really disturbing foalcon fic. The inclusion of diapers doesn't help.

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Considered there are foalcon fic with positive score, and considered that dialer foalcon isn't all that uncommon, I think I've done something else wtong too

6418187 I believe it's the very nature of this fic. I don't do foalcon, but I think that most of the ones with more upvotes are purely foalcon and nothing else. People who come here for that, and find all this extra stuff, are turned off and downvote.

Of course, I have no way of knowing if that's true or not.

This could have been mildly erotic, however it wasn't. And I will tell you why.

-Cottage cheese like substance coming out of Sweetie's girly bits. Why would you even say that? That sounds really gross.

-Creepy Doctor was a turn off.

-Feels like there was too much emphasis on the 'illness'.

-Really choice of words in places.

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Cottage cheese like substance coming out of Sweetie's girly bits. Why would you even say that? That sounds really gross.

Feels like there was too much emphasis on the 'illness'.

I tend to get invested in such details. Admittedly, I'm not a master of mediate between this and the majority's likes. Also, problems with balancing clop with plot (as I'm not exactly stellar in writing it, and thus I have to reinforce it in some other way).

-Creepy Doctor was a turn off.

I didn't mean him to be overly creepy, actually. It's also true that my apprecciation of chracters that inspire fear at sight but are actually pretty innocous has played a role.

-Really odd choice of words in places.

Having English as second langauge tends to do that. But, hey, at least it doesn't read like a spam e-mail for Viagra.

In any case, thank you for pointing me out the reason for why this is a piece of shit.

I quite enjoy reading about padded Sweetie Belle, and like foalcon.
I'm not into scat though, and for me it was a bit much details about that and the illness.
Overall I upvoted because of padded Sweetie.

*stabs*pervert

Where can I find Rubrony?

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