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... this is totally what it looks like.
Small slip-up into second-person there, but otherwise perfectly fine clop.
Oh, one other thing. Is "Lilith" the fanon name for R69 Angel? Figured it would just be Angel either way.
I LOVE IT
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I don't know if its cannon. Most butterscotch fics I read have the bunny as Lilith.
Five minuets later
Rainbow Blitz: YO SCOTCH! I was wonder if you waaaAAAAAWHAT IN THE NAME OF SOLARIS?!?
Not bad; quite good actually. It's a little bit rushed when it comes to the blowjob, but that's the only massive problem.
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Eris: "Mmmm do you have to shout so loud, I'm still tired."
6395439 You should DEFINITELY put that in the sequel. (if one ever comes out)
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If the person wants to pay for a commission, I'll have no issues.
6395459 sweet! good luck in your future projects!
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Thanks, I am currently offering my hands to anyone who wants to pay for story commissions.
6395465 sucks to be me then. I'm tapped out.
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My rates are $1 every 1000 words.
6395467 good to know.
It should be "Eris then vanished from the room.
That second period is probably meant to be a comma, and I'm hoping that the slash is supposed to be a period.
Ignore my previous comments, I'm going to pretend I never started to read this. Just forget this ever happened.
Especially that 35th paragraph.
I'm sorry to say that I stopped reading before I got to the end. There were numerous spelling errors, grammar problems and typos (Look for the wayward forward slash), not to mention there was no consistency between tenses. It was cute in the beginning, but it felt really rushed towards the end, like you just felt the need to finish the product and move on.
La historia me encantó ojalá tuviera una secuela donde Butterscotch intente contarle a sus amigos que ahora es pareja de Eris sería interesante