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SempiternalNemesis


We all know, deep inside of our hearts, that the end of our times approaches. Live your life not to become eternal, but to leave a legacy that lasts forever.

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Hidden deep on the cold, unforgiving landscapes of the Crystal Mountains, two machines of immense power lay dormant for hundreds of years. A bulky, armored vehicle and a slender, heavy aircraft awoke with newfound sentience to the pastel colored country of Equestria, with no knowledge of what they were designed for. How will this oblivious machines adapt to the peaceful, colorful ponies that populate the majority of these wondrous new world? Only time might tell.


=Exam-weeks ended, currently working on second chapter=
(Second attempt for a fic, constructive criticism is always welcome)

Chapters (1)
Comments ( 14 )

I'll read it when you post the second chapter.

6244624 Very well, give it week or two and the second chapter should be finished by then. TTFN

So a tank and a jet gain sentience? Or do they get turned into ponies... I'm kinda confused

6244801 Sentience, I'm afraid. Also, not a jet so to speak, a propeller aircraft

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Oh, I just assumed jet becuSe... You know, nazis
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Comment posted by Krieg cormac deleted Jul 25th, 2015

6244817 Agreed, though this particular aircraft would look interesting with jet engines...
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Also, I might add, that is a terrifying nazi-pony.

6244861 I don't recognize her, perhaps I've been gone from Fimfiction too long.

I loved it! My eye did twitch at

lies the ruins of ancient pony civilisations,

it's spelled civilizations, but that's me and my OCD nitpicking... Other then that, I enjoyed the concept, and the story overall!

6280944 Noted and corrected. Glad you liked it!

Sounds Interresting so far. I hope this will not end in a mindless Killing spree.

6294935 ETA of a new chapter? Really liked it so far, can't wait for another!

6294935 Have you killed this story?

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