What exactly were the four stars who aided in Nightmare Moon's escape? What happens when a star crashes into the earth causing the very foundation of Equestria to tremble? An expedition is dispatched by the Princess of the Sun, to the land where the star made contact. A land beyond the control of even the mighty rulers of day and night. Join Luna, Twilight ,Trixie and the rest of the expeditionary force as they journey across uncharted territory, unravel the mystery of the falling star and discover a threat far worse than the destruction of harmony.
AUTHORS NOTE: Be aware that the shipping in this story could be classified as light-shipping or friend-shipping. I left the shipping tag out initially, but since the relationships between the characters are a big part of the story I felt compelled to add it. Also, a new summary is in the works, one that best shows the reader what to expect in this crazy fanfic.
This chapter has been one of the most entertaining to read. I love the interaction between characters! Keep up the character and relationship development! ; )
This is a neat story, although I'm not entirely sure about what the x-over is with...
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I'm glad you like it! The Cross-Over comes later so don't worry, it will be revealed soon enough. I just have to make sure I can reveal it right. It's not something I've seen anyone try before, so it should be interesting.
ohh this is great so far
, and i think i know what the crossover is going to be!!!
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ORLY?
924 Going by the description, I keep thinking Warhammer 40K and that remains a possibility but I guess we'll see.
Is this by any chance a Dead Space crossover? I kinda got the idea from (spoiler) when he sings twinkle twinkle little star.
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Um. Thanks. Lol. I guess that means you enjoyed it. Thanks for reading.
Halo crossover... but not a halo crossover? hmm...
I do hope it is not a Halo crossover...I hope it is just a coincidance...but it probably is...
First i was like
But then i LOL'd
Honestly one of the funniest fics I've ever read.
This is awsome
FOR THE LOVE OF GOD MAKE MOOOOOAAAAAAAAARRRRRRRRR!!!!
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Oh don't worry...It's coming.
Interesting concept. It's Halo but... different. Hmm, could the land of "Twisted Metal" perhaps be the crashed aft section of the Forward Unto Dawn?
BRILLIANT, i just read it all today and, man, this is the best adventure fic i've read in a real while, and i congratulate you, i'm enjoying it all, and expect more
Trot Streame has unlocked a new achivement: PWN3D! by autorized Royal Guard Brutlallity
awesome fic, hope to see the next chapter soon!
Glad you all like it! Expect more soon. Chapters are going to be a little shorter for a while, but guess what that means? Quicker updates!
Thank you very much for your congratulations. You wont be disappointed!
damn i didn't even realize this was a halo crossover till i saw it in the comments...... ooohhhhhh maybe master chief will make an appearance..
good story......
Nicely done- Halo, eh? I'm looking forwards to the rest of this!
Thank you both for your great comments! Though just to clarify, it's a little more complicated than just a Halo crossover. You'll understand soon enough. I just have to make sure I do it right...if real life doesn't get in the way first...
Wow, finally an update, I just hope you can get everything on track soon
Fluttershy is best pony
nice.
Ah, misunderstandings. The root of a successful and happy relationship!
I'm not sure what to feel about Trot, yet. Is he a jerk with a heart of gold? Or just a jerk?
Ponies in armor. Smexy!
Looking forward to more!
I just have to say that this has been amazing, and the atmosphere is set up really well.
The only complaint I have until now is that Trot has been "hyped" in a negative way, sure, he's strong and all, but it's starting to seem a little far fetched for saying that he can kill everyone (main cast and Luna included), I know his character must be established, and I hope I am wrong and EVERYONE gets more development later, because I know you can make epic scenes happen and I know you won't disappoint when you show what everypony here can do
288638 I can see what you're saying about Trot, and I really REALLY appreciate constructive criticism like this. It really helps to hear from a reader. Going back and re-reading the part mentioned, It was not the best way to get across what I wanted. Trot is definitely not OP. So I'll make a minor adjustment.
As for character development and epic scenes? You wont be disappointed. Cross my heart, hope to fly, stick a cupcake in my eye.
Another good chapter. I like the little complications that go on between Applejack and Trot.
i gotta agree with Manestream. Trot is OP and needs a nerf in the next patch. GG all.
Just wanted to say that the revale in this chapter ah me laughing so hard. I honestly can't say why but it did.
Can't wait to see more from you.
The Zerg what next Da Orks
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Haha, well this story does have a comedy tag. New chapter coming soon guys.
It updated it's a miricle
Tell me about it.
And so it begins...
I had an interesting thought if you want to incorporate humans into your story as allies. Rick (Splatter-house Game) and other game characters that jump between realities could make an appearance could assist in the war to protect Terra.
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Thank you for the fave/like/comments! And especially the suggestions. Hopefully this story will be updated soon, its been kinda stalled lately because of my current job situation. But it's been resolved... kinda... sorta...
Zerg?
Not sure but im thinking the twisted metal with that fucking clown guy who's name I can't remember.
ZERG RUSH!!!
2659025 his name is sweet tooth