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GoldenRose


There are many things to tell about me. For example, I'm a freshman in high school and I love to create my own stories and drawings. Also I play the Sims and enjoy swimming.

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The town of Ponyville use to be a peaceful place, until a group of bandits come and take over. But when desperate times call for desperate measures, Mayor's Flim and Flam call in the Pied Piper. But when the mayors don't pay what they promised the Piper, they will dearly regret it.

This is my first story, so fill free to give me advice. Also, thanks to >>ChaosQueen for making the cover art.

Chapters (1)
Comments ( 19 )

... So Sweetie gave Apple Bloom a cupcake and that made them 'break up'?

Well actually in the story they're not friends because Apple Bloom promised to pay Sweetie Belle back but doesn't.

6241287 You need to add an alternative universe tag.

Ok, thx for the tip

I like it. The Pied Piper is one of my favorite stories. I can't wait for the next chapter! :D

"I promise I'll pay you back."

"So anyway, a few hours ago, Sweetie Belle asked me for two bits for payment for the cupcake she bought for me."

"And what did you do?" asked Applejack.

"I said no," answered Apple Bloom "I mean, it's just a cupcake she gave me, not a puppy!"

:rainbowhuh: Why would Apple Bloom do that?

Because with that last line u copied down in your comment, Apple Bloom is basically saying that she doesn't think it was a big deal.

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Never thought Apple Bloom would the type to go back on a promise. Just doesn't seem like something she would do.
Hey, I was wondering if you are looking for cover art for you're story I would love to do it. :twilightsmile:
send me a detailed description of how you would like it to look If you would like me to.

>>ChaosQueen
Actually yes, I am looking for cover art. If you want you can go right ahead just posted in the comments when you're done .

6252038 :yay: *yay* That's great.
Could you send me a detailed description of what you want it to look like. Through a PM or put it on my user page which ever you prefer.

recalculating...OH MY G-O-S-H HOW DID YOU KNOW THAT I LOVE THIS STORY?

Thx >> ChaosQueen, looks exactly like the description. You look so mysterious. Heck, discord even scaring me ( which is a good thing since the cover's good).

6415070 Glad that you like it. :twilightsmile:

Comment posted by ChaosQueen deleted Dec 12th, 2016

>> ChaosQueen Oh I have no problems with the uploading of the cover art. It's just that I've been busy with school work

Comment posted by ChaosQueen deleted Dec 12th, 2016
Comment posted by ChaosQueen deleted Dec 12th, 2016

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I'm wondering. :applejackunsure: Why is it you've cancelled this story?
Sad I won't get to read more of this story. :fluttershysad:

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