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Guidence From a Friend

After Matilda asked Sparkler to organize her wedding, her confidence boosted up. And since then, she tries to get her reputation back as the best organizer of Ponyville. But she finds that it's harder than it looks because has some competition with the princess of friendship. In order for Sparkler to accomplish her goal, she'll need to share how she feels and be given help from a friend.

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Shadow_Wolf

Shadow_Wolf #1 · Feb 1st, 2016 · · ·

Cute.

DarthSylar12

DarthSylar12 #2 · Feb 8th, 2016 · · ·

This is a great story. i love Amythest Star/Sparkler and after hearing she was best pre-Twilight organizer I always wondered how she felt if Twilight was overshadowing her. Great see fanfics like this delve into this character. 10/10

GoldenRose

GoldenRose #3 · Feb 8th, 2016 · · ·

6914148 thanks

Wild Stallion

Wild Stallion #4 · Apr 20th, 2021 · · ·

"You know, a good way to keep track and neaten things up around here is organize your ,"

I think this sentence was left unfinished on accident.

How could I pass up an opportunity lie this ?

I think you meant to say like not lie.

You have some spaces between punctuation marks and the end of sentences but other than that the technical aspect is pretty good and the plot is decent enough.

The descriptors and dialogue could be more varied but that's the kind of thing you only really learn how to do by researching different words and practicing using them in your dialogue.