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I hardly think this is rated 'Everyone', dude.
I'm frightened and I didn't even start reading.
Sounds family friendly to me.
I agree that this story should be rated T for teen. However, a story with that rating on this site requires that you check either 'sex' or 'gore'. None of which exists in my story.
I feel uncomfortable knowing that when I prepare to give a story a T rating I have to label it as either a story featuring graphic violence or graphic descriptions of sex.
Bad, BAD AUTHOR!
Don't abuse Scootaloo.
I got scolded by a moderator for a story that involved references to violence... Mods are getting LAZY AS HELL.
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uhm, it allows you to check one of those boxes but i don't think it requires one of them to be checked.
Why Scootabuse!?
640089 I didn't abuse Scootaloo, Luna did and it was more of a threat than actual abuse. If you had read the story (Which i don't think anybody commenting has actually done) you would know this.
If you want my personal opinion, I think you're trying too hard on this story.
Sure, long metaphors and big words can make a story riveting, and enjoyable, but only when used in the right moment. Also, please watch your punctuation. Commas can really make the difference in a story!
Other than that, incredibly impressive. Your art style is very attractive, and you definitely have a good mind for creating stories. Just watch your punctuation, and you could probably make your way to the top!
Three out of five moustaches for you, my friend.
640289 "I didn't abuse Scootaloo, Luna did...."
Uh, here's the thing: You're the author, and this is not a work of non-fiction where you're merely recording actual events.
Did you seriously just try to make a cupcakes version of Richardson's "Scootamom"? GTFO.
ASPERGERS AND AUTISM COMING OUT MY EARS! HURR HURR HURRRRRR!!!!
Hmm. I think you kind of shot yourself in the foot with your title and Everyone rating. Unlike most stories which nets >9000 dislikes really quickly, this is actually written pretty well and isn't cliched all to hell. I actually am somewhat interested in how this plays out.
Now, personal opinions here: you don't have explicit sex or gore in the "rip ponies in half and eat them" sort of way, but the story does contain strong sexual and violent themes. I think the Dark tag was definitely used well in this case. It feels gritty and cold, contrasting the warm fuzziness of the show without being all blood and guts like most fics in this genre. I applaud that. I don't know why this was so heavily disliked. Luna feels way out of character from the show, but you keep her in the new version you've created really well, and the whole story kind of hinges around her acting this way. So I can't even fault you on that. Grammar, spelling, and punctuation aren't perfect, but I wouldn't describe them as "bad". WTF is with the hate for this story?
It's got a few little problems, sure, but... I can't really find a reason to dislike the work on the whole.
Like and favorite from me, that's for sure. If only my vote was worth more so I could help offset all the hate. I thoroughly don't understand why, other than people flying off the handle after reading your title (which...I assume it'll eventually be significant later on?) and seeing the content compared to the rating and tags you gave it. Which is a damn shame.
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uh, those are optional tickboxes dude, frankly i dont know why we have them at all
I found this quite interesting. I am excited to see where this heads. a thumbs up and a favorite from me.
I don't understand what all the dislikes are about. I thought this was a great story, keep going.
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somepeople like stories ike that, i enjoyed it. admitly the author i probably venting alot of welled up emotions in an easy to comprehend way, with little skills on how to, but isnt venting emotions what storytelling is?
Intersting......
This has allot of potential. depends on how evil you want dark Luna to be.
It just depends on how dark you wanna make it.
Tracking and liking cuz i have faith in you.
Is there going to be a next chapter still?
I really do like this.
Then I read the comments.
Y THERE B SO MANY HATERZ?!
(I know about the spelling, I did that on purpose)
Dear haters,
Wanna bake some cupcakes with me?
640105 Christ one of my stories was a clop and was rated everyone and it was my fans that pointed it out
mods are lazy fucks