Celestia has a talk with Twilight about her feelings for a very special filly, whilst Applejack has a similar talk with Rainbow Dash. I believe it is fairly obvious how this one-shot will end.
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LOL dat ending , really I did not see that coming
You know, if you really wanted to, this could go on for much longer (HINT).
But in all seriousness, the flow miraculously didn't break with all those headers and made for an awesome, if not entertaining, read. I salute you!
One free thumb is yours.
Hmm, what a
Woah, didn't expect that ending.
Called it.
aww yeeeaah.
Nicely done! The crosscut dialogue flows beautifully, even if the ending is a bit predict...a...buh-wait --
*stops and re-reads last two paragraphs*
Me gusta. This was a nice little one-shot.
i thought it would be
and 
but it is 
and they want it to be 
and 
lol good job.
Did NOT see that one coming!
Fun interesting read.
330888 Thank you, I originally wrote this as a parody of the various trollfics littered around this site. It actually insults me whenever I see one on the front page, or when I see one featured on the top of the page.
330888 Thank you, I originally wrote this as a parody of the various trollfics littered around this site. It actually insults me whenever I see one on the front page, or when I see one featured on the top of the page.331291 I don't think anyone saw the end coming. Although originally I ended the story with Pinkie Pie murdering Applejack and hypnotising the princess into falling in love with her before an alien invasion starts and kills all the ponies in the land. Nobody wants to read a story like that right?
330888 Thank you, I originally wrote this as a parody of the various trollfics littered around this site. It actually insults me whenever I see one on the front page, or when I see one featured on the top of the page.331291 I don't think anyone saw the end coming. Although originally I ended the story with Pinkie Pie murdering Applejack and hypnotising the princess into falling in love with her before an alien invasion starts and kills all the ponies in the land. Nobody wants to read a story like that right?331093 No you didn't, but nice profile pic. Really takes me back to my days watching the annoyingly repetitive jokes on Spongebob. I guess I was alot easier to impress back in my early twenties.
330888 Thank you, I originally wrote this as a parody of the various trollfics littered around this site. It actually insults me whenever I see one on the front page, or when I see one featured on the top of the page.331291 I don't think anyone saw the end coming. Although originally I ended the story with Pinkie Pie murdering Applejack and hypnotising the princess into falling in love with her before an alien invasion starts and kills all the ponies in the land. Nobody wants to read a story like that right?331093 No you didn't, but nice profile pic. Really takes me back to my days watching the annoyingly repetitive jokes on Spongebob. I guess I was alot easier to impress back in my early twenties.330949 Personally I don't like long stories and i prefer to allow the reader to make up the ending, since 9 times out of 10 the reader is dissapointed with the way a story ends if it goes on too long. Of course, that's just my opinion.
349795 No I didn't
.
or I'll have nothing to watch
But thanks, and Spongebob was funny up until 3rd season. I hope it doesn't go that way with MLP
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Bravo, good show old bean.
You subverted expectations.
TWICE.
o.o I personally think this fic is cute as hell. Take my Upthumbing and Tracking!
plot twist plot twist plot twist plot twist
Heh, and old piece but a cute one. I love interwoven dialogue like this, its rarity alone making it an enjoyable treat.
There shouda been TwiDash as well as Applestia.