I have to admit. I was cautious when approaching this programme, but after the first episode. I fell completely in love with it. I'm a Sparity shipper, and a roleplayer!
After Spike is saved from a creature, he loses the one person he has grown to consider as a sister. Twilight Sparkle. Days go by and attempts from the other ponies to try and lure him back into everyday life have proved fruitless. Spike becomes desperate and attempts to try and revive Twilight using a forbidden spell. Rarity arrives just in the nick of time, and soon learns that it's going to take more than a simple gift to sway this broken hearted dragons mind.
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Wait, did you just say that it might not be good since it is your first story?!
I actually thought you were a professional writer or something xD This story was freaking great! Keep it up man, and considering this is your first story, you will improve a lot, and since you will, well, you'll be a amazingly crazy writer! :D
Great job! :)
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I got to agree with you there dude XD keep this up it may have been short but it was heart warming near the end.
It may not be good? It's better than good.....
Only Twilight wouldn't think so.
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Aw, you guys are too kind! Thank you for all your kind comments! :D
Okay, that was morbid. This is very good for your first story. I would like to find out more about how this all happened, but I don't think I could handle the gore tag that would need to be added. Plus, there's what will happen next?
I say again. This was great for a first story and can be greatly expanded on.
6229495 I wanna see a prequel to this (ie events leading to and Twilight's sacrifice and whatever Spike did to the creature that killed her!)