Hey everyone!
This was my 1st fan fiction I've ever made so... it's pretty bad XD
I rushed it at the end as I could not have thought of anything else... hehe...
please tell me how I can make my fan fictions better and leave a comment if I should make a sequel >3<
suggestions would be nice too!
This is a story about Rainbow Dash and Big Mac,
Rainbow Dash is willing to help Apple Jack with the farm so she helps Big Mac when she falls in love,
will it work out? Will she get dumped? Find out by reading Rainbow Mac, an original Fan Fiction by yours truly ^.^
Chapters (1)
pls make a sequel
SEQUEL!!!!!!!
good story. the adventure needs to continue!
It feels to rushed, lacks details and had syntax error... Please don't get angry, I Love the couple but the lack of quality it obvious. I would read the sequel thought.
6219847 Thank you for these tips, I'll try my best to do better next time! I will write a sequel when I get the time ^.^
Good basics, I'd suggest adding more description instead of making the sentences so short, if the sequel gets more "story" I'd defiantly read it ^^
I suggest a sequel but I think you need to slow down and flesh out your ideas more. Start slow and calm then get into it a little more. And try some cover art. Overall great story.