Sup viewers and fellow bronies and pegasisters. I'm Dogelol just an ordinary brony who likes reading and writing fimfics 
Im willing to become friends with everyone 
Chrysalis has been cursed by a wizard to become full derp every now and then. And one of her loyal subject has to take care for her during the process.
But will he be able to?
Warning contains high levels of Derping
Chicago Ted (editor)
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This is wonderfully hilarious! A silly concept through&through!
6285180 Glad you liked it
6285280 And I'm glad you wrote it!
this story is just silly, and I hope it's gets sillier an funnier
6317445 Glad you liked it, I'm working on CH2 now and soon you may see how silly it is
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please...please use the Can-Can. you can never go wrong with the Can-Can. it well go for silly to looney
Can't wait to read!
6392792 Hope you like it, thou there may be a delay in uploading chapters.
"Casted" is not a word. The correct word is "cast". It's one of those weird words that doesn't follow the rules.
Break
First of all, you have a repeated paragraph. Secondly, you need a pronoun between "while" and "started". Who started checking on his items?
Missing a quotation mark at the start.
Then
There's also a few missing commas here and there, but they're not as noticeable of an error as these are. I rarely bother pointing those out.
6412554 Thanks for letting me know
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6445636 Dont worry
dead?