This story is a sequel to Heart Plus - Dawn Arc
Going for a rewrite of Heart Plus. Splitting personalities and such.
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The story starts off with a girl by the name of Emma and how she is stuck in the land of Equestria. After her arrival, she starts trying to find a way back home. But her journey to that goal is blocked with all kinds of perilous obstacles, threatening her and her friends.
Luckily, she has a few tricks up her sleeve. With the help from her allies and a little luck, she may just turn the tides to save the land and go home... or not.
Chapters (7)
Great story so far, take my favorite and tracking. For some reason I can't upvote the story.
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Thank you! I hope to make this into a great experience for all of my readers.
Is she gonna get chaos powers? I ended up not enjoying Heart Plus nearly as much as before that part because Kasin seemed to just become very emotionless and bland after getting chaos powers.
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Chaos powers won't be in the story. It's going to be replaced by something else.
Emma will not receive this either power too. She finds something different.
...*Repeatedly bangs head on the desk*
Above anything you can ask her, you asked her THAT!? My god Spike.
Not back. Re-reading Heart Plus and reading this. Let's see where this goes.
Wow.. You go Spike!
Wow.. I want more.
I wonder if in this story Lyra is a former human. It would be nice.
NOICE! PONIES ARE DICKS!
I know Emma will save the day, but I wish the native humans would save her.
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They're not exactly innocent in nature, seeing how there are a ton of guards EvErYwHeRe in Canterlot.
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Geez, you future seeing readers are hard to trick. I'm gonna have to fine some new ideas.
Wow... I love this chapter and I found no naughty stuff! Awesome!
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Glad you liked it :D
When you say, "naughty", are you talking about stuff like in the first two chapters?
6711446 I think so. Though I was half tired when I made that comment so who knows.
6709701 Would I be wrong in saying that the Equestrian humans in this story are more like the Al Bhed from Final Fantasy X than modern Earth culture wise?
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I would answer that, but if I keep answering your questions regarding the future, it can cause a paradox. So you're just going to have to wait until we get to that mystery or you can do your own investigation.
Sorry, but the space time continuum is already fragile enough. I don't need you to cause some sort of wormhole that will break the time line any further.
6712997 Alright, I'll stop. If you can't tell, I'm really hyped for this story because I loved Heart Plus: Dawn Arc and your other stories .
You stay classy.
Thanks for telling me that you're not dead!
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Welcome!
Good chapter! Kasin... The whole heart shard thing is obviously based on UNDERTALE, right?
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Heart Shard was actually my idea before Undertale, so technically, no. But the fact that Undertale backs up the whole soul and heart this is just wonderful on my side.
I also really like that game.
MOARRR..... plz?