What happens when a certain griffin returns to seek revenge on the pegasus that abandoned her, and what lengths will a pony go to in order to save the mare she loves.
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The-rogue-shadow
I'm relatively new to the world of fanfiction, but I do have a real deep passion for both MLP:FIM and writing.
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Errr... Please put this on Teen.
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Erm... I'm sorry, what? I'm new here and don't quite understand how it all works yet.
Came for the interesting description
Stayed for Badass Macintosh
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I'm glad you are enjoying it. But Big Mac gets considerably more Badass in the spinoff; 'A New Harmony'
Nice!
AppleDash is gotta be one of my favorite parings.
However the pacing is a bit fast, but since it's not 'WiP' I wouldn't worry to much.
You defiantly earned my thumbs!
I, I, I'm so sorry, I couldn't stop laughing!
Forgive me.
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Thank you, i'm glad that you are enjoying it, and I know that the pacing was a bit off, but that was because that this was my first try at a fanfic, but I have improved greatly in the follow on series that I will put up eventually.
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What part made you laugh?
oh no she didn't!!!
probably that applejack was being nervous about the clouds.
oh dear, this is really kinda scary, the power that fake-jack has. to even physically change Rainbow's appearance.
she will not get away with this!
apples. ahahaha
oneof the best appledash fics i've read, and that's saying something, as i've read loads.
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Thank you, I appreciate it. If you would like to read the sequel to this you can find it on my deviantart page. The title being Always connected- Aftermath.
Wow...
This, is a very, VERY, good story...
*salute*
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Thank you very much. *Bow*
I have a quick question:
)
Now that I've finished reading this story, should I go right into "AC - The Aftermatch" or should I read "A New Harmony" to get a better understanding of what have happend while AJ and Rainbow was asleep? (I've read the first chapter of the aftermatch
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I would say read 'A New Harmony' as it fills in the gaps between 'Always connected' and 'Aftermath'
Too fast.
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I'm sorry? What do you mean?
Hmm, before continuing on, I will give you my thoughts. First, this is a very interesting pace; fast, but tolerable. Also if you don't mind, could you double space between each paragraph (as in press enter twice). See a wall of text can be very eye straining for some people. Good job so far on the AppleDash ship. I like the delay of the romantic part of the story, but I do not appreciate the sight of Gilda...
Ugh, Gilda, just typing the name makes me want to punch something, so I will call her.... You-Know-Who. Anyways, I have this feeling I am going to see You-Know-Who again later in this story. This is a very good story, and I will be finishing it shortly, and I will give you feedback on my thoughts. Keep up the good work and don't forget to double space.
From hell, to you, and back again,
Soto Konoha
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Thank you very much for the feedback, everything helps, and I will definitely double space when I do my next edit. Also, Once you get finished with this, you may also like to read the spin-off; "A New Harmony" and then the other Spin-off "The element of laughter' and finally, the sequel, "Always connected- Aftermath" Which I am yet to put up.
This is indeed a very good story. I can't wait to read the after math of the story, and "A New Harmony". Keep up the good work.
From hell, to you, and back again,
Soto Konoha
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Thank you very much
This was a different Appledash story than I'm used to reading, but I liked it a lot, good job!
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Thank you. I am really happy that you enjoyed it. Sorry to promote myself, but there is a sequel called 'Always connected- Aftermath' that you can find on my deviantart page.
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Cool I'll be sure to check it out.
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I hope you enjoy that as well. But i'm not going to lie, it might not make much sense without reading the other two stories that I have on here, but it's not really essential that you do.
A good idea, but needs more work.
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Thanks, and I know that this story is very rough around the edges..... and in the middle. But It was just a little thing to get me into writing fanfiction. I had never done it before this story. All of the sequels to this are much better.
Stumbled across this site, stumbled across your stories, created account just to say: HOLY SHIT! This is awesome! Continue writting more fics please
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Thank you very much. I'm very happy you enjoyed it. Might I ask if you saw the sequels to this one?
Noticed mistakes here and there, but this chapter was enjoyable nonetheless. I also understand that this was written about a month ago.
Here's an example of one of 'em:
Exclaiming is usually when someone is yelling in excitement, anger, or shock; hence it should be something like this:
It sort of looks like a run-on, too. I suppose I'll add an optional edit here, too:
My final question here is...do you have an editor?
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Wow, thanks very much for pointing that out. And I suppose I should explain; This was my first ever fanfic and I wrote all nine chapters in the space of about three days. I just really wanted to get them up on my deviantart and out into the world, so I didn't edit them at all. Not to mention I have learned a lot about grammar as the year has progressed. But to answer your question; no, I don't have an editor for any of my stories aside from 'Equine Vampiris' And that is only because one of my classmates offered to help, as did my Writing professor.
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You can decline, of course; it won't be a problem!
Yes, I've seen your improvement from your latest story!
Three days and you managed to type up nine chapters? That's an accomplishment all on its own! Anyway, if you ever need help with editing, I'm sure I can be of help (grammar-wise, anyway) on future stories, which was the reason I was asking. I have too much time on my hands to not be doing anything.
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It would be an honour. I'm going to need some help when it comes to my upcoming stories. Because I have a whole universe to write after I finish 'Dusk Rises' Which actually reminds me. If you liked this one, (despite the grammar issues) then you might like the sequel 'Always connected- Aftermath'
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A sequel sounds good; I'll check it out! Also, private message me once you need me for a job.
Highly decent chapter, overlooking the...you know, grammar part. The "Applejack sings to Rainbow" idea was pure genius!
Derpy?! That was a huge surprise; I expected somepony slightly...crazier.
Hmm...were-dash? That's something I haven't read in a while.
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Sounds good.
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Thanks very much. Writing this was a lot of fun.
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You aren't the only person to say that actually.
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I don't think I've ever seen a Were-Dash. I've seen the Werelight tumblr and I have Vampony Twilight in another story.
Ohoho, deceit?
I have a feeling the next chapter's going to contain the full-on climax.
I'm now at the conclusion of this story, and I'll say this:
The ending was excellent. I'll go read the sequel now.
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I'm honestly ecstatic you enjoyed it. Although you might like to read 'A New Harmony' and 'The Element of Laughter' as well as 'Dusk Rises' to bridge to the gap in between the two 'Always connected's'
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And I will!
I appreciate you going back and answering all of my comments! That's a real plus.
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Thanks, I promised myself when I started putting stuff online that I would always answer any comments I got, not matter what. And always thank everyone for faving me and watching me and stuff like that.
hmmmm, a fic in which fillyfooling is prominent in canterlot? interesting to say the least. and Applejack with wings? u sir have earned urself a like and a fav.
hahaha, OH...IT...IS...ON!!!!!! WHooooooo Appledash fight!!!!