I wasn't expecting this to ever update again! What a pleasant surprise! Is it too soon to say welcome back? Because you know... fic still not finished. /hint hint.
First decent Changeling clop I’ve read in a while. It’ good to know you’re still alive to. Really want to find out where this story goes. Best of luck!
"Bon Bone" - Bon Bon "about to descent again" - "about to descend again" "like a thirst dog" - "like a thirsty dog"
If I had any criticism, it's that the paragraphs were too often written from one point of view, alternating each paragraph as if they were listing chess moves: "X did that" then "Y did that" then "X did that." I could almost color-code Lyra's paragraphs green and Bon-Bon's pink, for ease of reading. This is not a huge flaw, though.
You guys got any idea how hard it is to type in a coffin? dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/sillyfilly_Twilight_Sparkle.png
InB4 I ruin my own fanfic dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Lyra_dealwithit.png
1806846 Well, at least you're still alive!
finally an update
It's alive!!!
Don't you dare stop this fanfic!
HOLY FUCK IT LIIIIIIIIIIVES!
I missed this story. Nice to see it and you are still alive. Best changeling clop I've read so far too.
By Luna's crotchtits! It updated! ... I'll have to reread the story tomorow.
Good to know you're still with us.
The nickname sugar-rump has a whole new meaning now.
I wasn't expecting this to ever update again! What a pleasant surprise!
Is it too soon to say welcome back? Because you know... fic still not finished. /hint hint.
Comes back from the dead, writes clop
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Finally, an upda-OH FAUST, MY EYES!
HUZZAH!!!
So when's a chapter with actual storytelling coming?
Not that this isn't nice, it's just not really what I signed up for, lol. It's good for what it is, I'll give it that.
This story updated!?
It's a porn chapter, but I don't care. This story updated!
I shall be eagerly waiting for Twilight's response when Bon Bon finally decides to tell her.
Ummmm. Did twilight leave the window as soon as she saw what bon bon was, or did she stay for the whole performance?
XD i can just imagion Twilight's face as she watches the lovers.
Dosth mine eyes decive us!?
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... Do my eyes deceive me, or did you just update?
First decent Changeling clop I’ve read in a while.
It’ good to know you’re still alive to. Really want to find out where this story goes. Best of luck!
"Bon Bone" - Bon Bon
"about to descent again" - "about to descend again"
"like a thirst dog" - "like a thirsty dog"
If I had any criticism, it's that the paragraphs were too often written from one point of view, alternating each paragraph as if they were listing chess moves: "X did that" then "Y did that" then "X did that." I could almost color-code Lyra's paragraphs green and Bon-Bon's pink, for ease of reading. This is not a huge flaw, though.
yay now we only need the continuation of this story
So awsome!
Hehe, Lyra found a new exotic ingredient for BonBon's sweets!