Well, here it is! I promised you all that I would make a sequel, and this is just the start!
Thankfully, KiroTalon was kind enough to proof-read it beforehand, so you all wont have to put up with my hate of this thing called 'grammar' Hopefully this will be able to live up to my previous story, though I wouldn't hold my breath. Or maybe I should, I had chili dogs for dinner
Anyway, I'm expecting this will take longer than 'A Change of Face'. For one, I'm going to try and make the story itself longer, and likely with larger chapters, though only just. Also, I've noticed I'm not as good nor as fast when my writing isn't fueled by emotion, so I'm going to end up taking longer to work through some parts of the story. But don't worry, I will get through it all, and there will be parts where emotions run high. Also clop, which I'm still not sure how I'm going to deal with that, but it wont be till later on. And when I say 'clop', I mean more along the lines of 'two ponies in love expressing their love together intimately'. This will NOT turn into a sex-fest. But a relationship like the one between Lyra and Bon Bon should have it's 'private' moments.
Anyway, I've rambled on long enough. I hope you all enjoy the story, and I'll try not to make you all wait too long between chapters.
Admittedly, Bon-Bon said that she had never tried to use her horn for magic, aside from shape-shifting, but wouldn't she be aware that Queen Chrysalis is able to perform telekinesis?
Mayhaps she never met the queen? She stated she was more of a scout then an actual drone so she probably didn't spend very long with the hive. That and the queen may have powers normal changelings don't have
Well, here it is! I promised you all that I would make a sequel, and this is just the start!
Thankfully, KiroTalon was kind enough to proof-read it beforehand, so you all wont have to put up with my hate of this thing called 'grammar'
Hopefully this will be able to live up to my previous story, though I wouldn't hold my breath. Or maybe I should, I had chili dogs for dinner
Anyway, I'm expecting this will take longer than 'A Change of Face'. For one, I'm going to try and make the story itself longer, and likely with larger chapters, though only just. Also, I've noticed I'm not as good nor as fast when my writing isn't fueled by emotion, so I'm going to end up taking longer to work through some parts of the story. But don't worry, I will get through it all, and there will be parts where emotions run high. Also clop, which I'm still not sure how I'm going to deal with that, but it wont be till later on. And when I say 'clop', I mean more along the lines of 'two ponies in love expressing their love together intimately'. This will NOT turn into a sex-fest. But a relationship like the one between Lyra and Bon Bon should have it's 'private' moments.
Anyway, I've rambled on long enough. I hope you all enjoy the story, and I'll try not to make you all wait too long between chapters.
Twilight, why u so curious?
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I promised myself to stop reading incomplete fanfics two days ago and you just made me break that promise for the second time.
Looking forward to the second chapter as always!
Watch out Twi! Lyra is out to getcha!
WOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO~
the sequel is here!
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Time for Lyra Ninja Warrior... GO!
oh, sweet, the big time's here.
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And another good read for the day.
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ITS HERE YAY
Ooooh, this is great stuff.
yes YES a sequel favorited and thumbed up keep writing
Favorited (not that it really means much coming from me ), thumbed up, email tracked and bookmarked just in case.
MURDERING TIME!!
Magistar: Get off the computer, Pinkie! Anyway, Lyra's probably gonna try an amnesia spell. Difficult, but worth it!
Well, Twilight didn't come off as a dick, so !
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Will do! *Actually has a physical bowl of popcorn right in front of him*
Admittedly, Bon-Bon said that she had never tried to use her horn for magic, aside from shape-shifting, but wouldn't she be aware that Queen Chrysalis is able to perform telekinesis?
Mayhaps she never met the queen? She stated she was more of a scout then an actual drone so she probably didn't spend very long with the hive. That and the queen may have powers normal changelings don't have
woot! i just finished the first and LOVED it! reading this i know im excited a thumb and fave/track from me!
Ah this was good i got a video to describe the story
Silly ponies, you couldn't come up with a cover story in two months? 😉