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Well, here it is! I promised you all that I would make a sequel, and this is just the start!
Thankfully, KiroTalon was kind enough to proof-read it beforehand, so you all wont have to put up with my hate of this thing called 'grammar'
Hopefully this will be able to live up to my previous story, though I wouldn't hold my breath. Or maybe I should, I had chili dogs for dinner
Anyway, I'm expecting this will take longer than 'A Change of Face'. For one, I'm going to try and make the story itself longer, and likely with larger chapters, though only just. Also, I've noticed I'm not as good nor as fast when my writing isn't fueled by emotion, so I'm going to end up taking longer to work through some parts of the story. But don't worry, I will get through it all, and there will be parts where emotions run high. Also clop, which I'm still not sure how I'm going to deal with that, but it wont be till later on. And when I say 'clop', I mean more along the lines of 'two ponies in love expressing their love together intimately'. This will NOT turn into a sex-fest. But a relationship like the one between Lyra and Bon Bon should have it's 'private' moments.
Anyway, I've rambled on long enough. I hope you all enjoy the story, and I'll try not to make you all wait too long between chapters.
Twilight, why u so curious?
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I promised myself to stop reading incomplete fanfics two days ago and you just made me break that promise for the second time.
Looking forward to the second chapter as always!
Watch out Twi! Lyra is out to getcha!
WOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO~
the sequel is here!
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Time for Lyra Ninja Warrior... GO!
oh, sweet, the big time's here.
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And another good read for the day.
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ITS HERE YAY
Ooooh, this is great stuff.
yes YES a sequel favorited and thumbed up keep writing
Favorited (not that it really means much coming from me
), thumbed up, email tracked and bookmarked just in case.
Well, I must be off my rocker, letting this chapter get so fricking huge
I just hope it's worth it, and you guys appreciate it
Anyway, I'm gonna be out of town for about a week, and trying to get my tablet fixed, so it'll be a while before I manage to get the third part ready. But don't fret, It's already in the works, and will be on it's way to you all as soon as it can
Also, the first chapter peaked (far as I know) at #7 on the popular stories list. All of my
to you guys reading my chicken scratch 
The spacing is kinda weird. All the paragraphs are chopped up
Please do something about the messed-up spacing...
I apologize for the weird spacing. No idea how it happened, but it should be fixed now
oh snap, this won't end well
INMINENT CLOP TIME INCOMING!
I suppose that Twilight's mind stopped working when either saw Bon-Bon deactivating her Glamor transformation or the fact that Lyra is making-out with a changeling... or the fact that Bon-Bon was a changeling all this time, anyway the next chapter will be great.
...but seriously, you have to do something with those over-abused spacing, they actually mess up the continuity while reading
Man, not that I'm complaining, but is Bon-Bon now the "Go-to" when we need a character to be a changeling?
Keep this up, I enjoy it.
I....I.....I..........
MMMMMMMMMMMMMOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAARRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRR!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
please.
642499 Yeah - it's partly due to the fact that whenever we hear her speak in the show, she seems to have a different voice each time.
Walkin' in on somepony is bad enough, but walkin' in on somepony and a changeling (when you have prejudice against them, like Twilight undoubtedly does) is even worse.
I'm not anticipating the forewarned 'clop' in this fic, but I'm very much okay with what romance you've written in this chapter: it's sweet and gentle
I don't think this fic should need the mature-grade stuff, it'll be great even without it
Was it worth it you ask? Um, duh?
This story-line is awesome!! Hee fang-face and harp-butt was my favorite part! I'm on pins and needles! Write more soon!!!
PS, congrats on making the featured box!
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Thanks.
And yes, I realize that. However, I do want to try and explore all aspects of their relationship, including the more intimate aspects. I also want to 'flex' my literary 'muscle' and see how well I can work a love scene in this context. I do, however, realize that it's not for everyone. So I will make it a point to offer a 'clop-lite' version of any chapter that includes love scenes. You can thank Peppy Greyskull for giving me that idea. So if you prefer, please be sure to read the censored versions if such content isn't to your tastes.
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Hehe, thanks! And I plan on it!
However, starting this Saturday, I will be out of town for a week, likely without much free time to write. The third part is already started, it'll just take a while before I can get it finished and posted. Sorry to make you all wait, but I shall not abandon you!
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good story.
oh my god im speechless... that was awesome, im 13 so i probably shouldn't read this but yea this inset i just hope someone dosent stand behind me who knows what they'll thinkencrypted-tbn0.google.com/images?q=tbn:ANd9GcRcrcR44TOhFQ8KV6RsZb0PwH5kHNd1rBAE1ION35P3ShgbxWIZgXHmwBIx
moar pleze
MURDERING TIME!!
Magistar: Get off the computer, Pinkie! Anyway, Lyra's probably gonna try an amnesia spell. Difficult, but worth it!
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You're a filly and what the fuck is this?!
Hehe, just kidding.
Yeah, trust me, at that age, it's almost expected you'll get places you shouldnt be. But just to be sure, when it comes out, be sure to have the 'clop-lite' chapter on hand. Just in case.
Talk about "eye candy".
And don't worry too much about the clop stuff. I really don't see the problem some people have with it. We're dealing with anthropomorphized ponies; they may be in different bodies, but they have distinctly human personalities. And as Terence once said, "Homo sum, humani nihil a me alienum puto", or "I am a human being, I consider nothing that is human alien to me."
MOAR
FOR THE LOVE OF CELESTIA WHAT HAPPENS NEXT?!!!
Maybe the scene will be so shocking that Twilight will fall into a coma! Or at least unconscious.
Oh, Bon-Bon. You just have the worst of luck, don't you?
Don't do anything stupid, Twi.
Please think first. You're almost as good at thinking as you are at overreacting.
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Unfortunately her thinking usually leads to more overreacting.
Just found this fic, and the previous one! Best changeling fic i have ever read!
Have a moustache!
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Even better than Transcend ?
Me personally, I can't possibly choose. Both...Too...Perfect!
Smoke and Mirrors ain't too shabby either
... Twilight asks to join in?
During the part where Lyra follows Twilight I imagined her turning towards the readers and in an Elmar Fudd voice she said "Be very very quiet. I am hunting Twilights"
The summary makes it sound like Twilight is a villain!
I'm hoping Twilight isn't a dick about it. Can't really start reading this 'till tomorrow... 4:00 AM is not a time for reading more. 
I have really enjoyed this story so far, and am glad it's getting the attention it deserves, but... I hate to "but".
Seems you use the term "beloved" alot. ALOT. Um. Just an observation - loving it all otherwise! Just trying to helpfully point out... er. That.
Liked the story so far. I hope that Lyra is overreacting and Twilight won't blast the changeling with her magic laser, call the guards or do something similar.
Just wanted to point out that you have mentioned several times in A Change of Face that the bedroom was on the second floor, yet Twilight can watch Lyra and Bon Bon through the window...
I wouldn't worry about chapter length. You're still far from the absurdity that is Fallout Equestria stories. Many of those have chapters over 8000 and even 10000 words long. Project Horizons' newest chapter is almost 29000 words long.
I really love this story. It's like you could read my mind and made a story that would fulfill whatever I imagined.
643661 This one is good, as is the prequel, and I have read smoke and mirrors and it's decent
I'll have to try transcend sometime soon. But I'd like to point out one other by Razorbeam that's coming along nicely.
Razorbeam also has a very excellent Rarity/Spike or Spike/Celestia shipfic if that's your thing. It's quite good. Teen rated.
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Such a good Story! WOW, can't wait for the next chapter!
Was I the only one that had the Pink Panther theme song stuck in my head during Lyra's "spy bussiness"? Oddly fitting somehow.
You might as well change the title to "Windows and Cliffhangers" already if the two first chapters are any indication
As always, eagerly awaiting more.
Volkova
Eeyup! the best changeling fic.
Must be the lyra and bon bon aspect
thank you for the story
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Heh, that's cause they couldn't wait to get upstairs, and just used the living room couch.
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Twilight is just being Twilight
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"Pony season!"
"Changeling season!"
"Pony season!"
"Changeling season!"
"Pony season!"
"Changeling season!"
"Pony season!"
"Changeling season!"
"Twilight season!"
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ur crazy... but im okay with this!