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Fracturedheart
Fuck you cunts! I am better then you!!!!
Fracturedheart
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Its fine that some don't like it. But! Why don't you like it? I can not do better if I do not know what's wrong.
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Learning how to properly use the English language usually works out for me.
6257098 For someone who doesn't like rape....you sure read a lot of rape fics.
Just saying.
And you had rape in YOUR story....so what the hell?
Personally I lofed the whole idea behind this stiry, and the way you had it go was awesome. Keep up the good work mate.
6256913 you did fine. To hell with the haters.
Uuuhhhhhh wow i'm just gonna cry in the corner cuz Scootaloo is my favorite side character.
6257048 Ok. I'm not sure where you're from and don't really care, but if you could elaborate on what the English language is supposed to be then I'm pretty sure that I'd like to hear it. It reads fine to me. And if you're talking about perfect punctuation then you don't read as much as I feel you should. This is not an English book.
6257584 You trying to push your opinion that rape shouldn't be a fetish is just that: your opinion. Keep it to yourself. And yes there are people out there that don't like it. Don't read the story!!!
And stating that the community, by and large doesn't like it is just asinine. Of course they don't. Again, they don't have to read it. Just as YOU don't HAVE to read it. And I'm sure that being a total ass to someone about their first story really gets you off. It's rape. Mental, but rape just the same. IMHO.
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The English language is a collection of syntax usually used by North Americans, parts of Europe and Australia to communicate.
It is not an English book, but it is indeed a story which conveys the use of the English language. If the author's first language is not English, then I can understand. If it is, then the least you could do is use it properly.
If there are several things wrong with the description (the thing that is supposed to make me interested in the story in the first place), then chances are the content inside is less likely to be good. This website has a writing style guide (under the FAQ tab) that the author can use to brush up on grammar and spelling. I suggest that he/she reads it a couple times so he can be a better writer later down the road.
6257098 "brutal revenge rape fic, and Dash raped Scootaloo to death seems perfectly okay to you?" You got that from what I wrote? Scootaloo gets screwed over in so many story's . Should she not have her day? Even it is by the hands of a big brutish human?
6258066 Well I will just to make my next story better. So thank you for your input!
what the fuck
Ten minutes of my life that I'll never get back.
Personally, I do not read, nor even like violent fics, nor will I even read this one nor comment on, it. I will not upvote it, nor will I downvote it, I will simply leave it alone. What you chose to write is up to you, what I chose to read is up to me, and I chose not to read, comment on, vote on or do anything with your story. you are on your own on this one.
That made no sense.
It's decent 6/10
6259273 Thank you.
y u do dis
I've seen worse. How was this rejected?? Come on fimfic.
I'm biased cause I frickin love your guts, but 7/10 <3
I haven't read this and seeing the amount of dislikes makes me not want to read it but I will and see if I like it. Maybe it will at some point have a lot more likes but for now it won't. Don't worry, I'm sure it will receive more positive feedback. Adding this to greatness to read later
That wasn't that bad in my opinion. I'm blown back by this and for good reason. I don't understand why it got so much hate because this is amazing. Have any other stories planned?
7371795 Thank you. Most was from people that did not even read it. Yes I do .
I kinda like this story. Rope is hard for me to read, but I read due to the dislikes. I'll give you a nice thumbs up buddy.
I like these stories, short and someone died.
7376810 Thank you.
This reminds me of the Atrocious Angel of Scatology. As in it's covered in shit.
I'm so happy you got it up!!
Rape Scootaloo!!
Always rape Scootaloo!
This fic is not making any sense to me
7382135 Watch the movie "I Spit On Your Grave" Plus I butchered it a little when I could not a clear answer on why it got revoked.
7385758 i apologize ma'am but.. I read the whole fic and... It's just doesn't highlight the plot. It focuses more on the intimacy and blood. (I know you are not a professional writer but you could use a little help on the plot planning)
7387535 Yes . I agree with you. I had not been here long when I wrote this. My editors helped me the best they could. I just could not articulate what I need them to do. Plus I was going to do a prequel to fill in the blanks but when it got revoked I lost heart.
Nice story!!!! It was zecora wasn't it?
7554129 Maybe
Well, that was certainly something. I wasn't too sure of the storyline although the ending did give a little away. Why Scootaloo and not any of the other ponies? Why is there a human there and how did he get there? Why would Zecora do something that extreme and for what reason? And many more. You've gotta add these things so the readers know what they are reading about! But not bad for a first fic, and I like the lack of shame just jumping into this site busting out a revenge rape fic. Don't see that too often! Was just a wee bit fast paced but read fine.
6/10
7829508 I butchered it trying to get it passed. The hole story was there but...
7928181 Yeah, these kind of stories have a lot of obstacles when it comes to moderation. I hope it's easier for you when you get around for a second story
7928275 Ooo, delete the comment so that you don't spoil it for everyone!
(Cool idea, is that what you're working on?)
7928512 No that was part of the original story.
7928548 Oh okay
Judging by the tags. description and plot alone...
8466866
But did you like it?
8466886
No
8466890
Why ?
8466890
Been on you tube today?
Did you novelized a whole movie or something? You are not supposed to do that. Or did you went overboard with graphic content?
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Well cunt if you think it broke the rules report it.