"When I get old, I am going to be: Rice. Frisco style." - Ed 2004
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Poor guy. Didn't even last long enough to start. Oh well, Pinkie's probably going to help him practice. A lot.
That was funny. Glad to see. Pinkie acting like a psychiatrist.
Not that i hate it, i am just a bit sad that is is probably really only a Clopfic story now.
Darling Pinkie you should of seen my Spikey Wikey with his first time, We had to call the fire department!
First? you should of seen his basket ! Cinderdragon!
Awe COME ON !
THAT DOOMIE IS A SPUNKY LITTLE BUG!
Dude needs to work on his stamina. Also, how could this story not be any less weird if not more so then some of your other stories? For example, your Celestiaphilia story, Despite being near the top of the "weird-o-meter" in my books was also very enjoyable. So hopefully the same will be true for this one.
SEQUAL!!!
Wow. Major misfire at the end.
barely*
there or then?
poor little guy was too excited! THIS IS AWESOME!!!
6230333 same
All I can say is that I am looking forward to the next chapter.
Lol. Blue.
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Clop... 'Dat phrasing.
"chapter 1, he already made a reference"
been waiting to see a sequel! keep this going man, high hopes!
Stem and Fertilizer is my new favorite euphemism.
WHAT A TEASE! only 1 chapter is out I NEED MORE! i REALLY liked doomiepie, it was a new and cool shipping i can get behind =D
talk about a "hooves on experience"
I'm guessing it was your lack of experience that lead this chapter to take so long?
I can live with that, because the chapter is pretty good. It isn't the most arousing thing out there, but it has the humour and general quality I've come to enjoy.
I've waited 3 months for an update..... SO WORTH IT
This was so freaking hilarius!!!!
Back away slowly, just back away! Also, YEEEAAH update!
and that's why the Royal Guard, HAZMAT ,and the health department inspectors closed Sugar Cube Corner for a few weeks.
Domee and Spike can have a competition
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It's a good thing Twilight Sparkle didn't wander in, because then they'd be dealing with Twilight Snapple.
At least it's not Twilight again.
Damn, this chapter was hilarious, especially the Mrs. Cake scene.
About damn time those two hit it off.
That's certainly one way to feed!
Keep going! ;)
Just more of those hilarious scenes ala. Miss Cake?
T-t-t-they st-stutter... t-too much to make it ... Uh. Make it. r-r-r-readable.
C-c-cut down on the c-constant st-stuttering.
this is some funny ass shit!!! 9.8 out of 10
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How very
Oh Gods....the references.....so many..
WoW! Rarity must of checked out this book a gazillion times!
I can dream can't I?
and It was my job to check it in. . .
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Could someone please make a list of references in this chapter?
I recognised a couple outright and recognised a few more as references without knowing what they were referencing.
Twilight really does need to look into a new hobby, cause Doomie's right, she WILL run out of books eventually.
Twilight probably takes reading picture books meant for foals seriously as well
Oh man, I think i saw at least six fic references, and a dozen or so show references. Fun fun!
Definitely need help on those red squiggles though...
Keep going! ;)
Did I just saw a "Changeling Courtship Rituals" reference here?
This was very funny. loved how they kept reading while twilight drove them to the door XD
Though the references were great, I suggest maybe making them a bit more subtle; especially when there are so many in one chapter. They were funny but kinda getting a bit annoying at times. Sometimes making them short and funny makes the joke more appreciated rather than explaining everything just to bounce to another reference.
The only reference I didn't found was one abaut 'Fifty Bales of Hay' if you know what I mean...
I think I saw about 30 undertale references in there
I think you mean bait. Because bate is an angry mood.
It is an interesting idea, using the mirror pool to duplicate ponies for their love. We don't think it's entirely sustainable though, the pool will probably run out of magic to build the constructs out of eventually...
Keep going! ;)
I feel sorry for Doomie 2
Especially for clone Doomie. So many happy endings.
Well then, didn't see that coming... then again, neither did clone Doomie.
very satysfying.
This feels just like that Ed episode where Mr. and Mrs. Bunny get their freak on.
On another lewd note, the magic clone pool has now opened up a boatload of new-level kinky possibilities inside my horny horny head, and not just Doomie Pinkie gangbanging orgies. I'm talkin' Giant Breezie!Pinkie with Shapeshifting Futa-Fem!Doomie doing it on top of Tom the Rock covered in weird Poison Joke sex magic while Maud and the other Pie sisters watch. During heat.
I know, I am ashamed of myself yet currently cannot think of anything else.
7004799 Twoomie, if you will.
Slow laugh of hilarity