Poor guy. Didn't even last long enough to start. Oh well, Pinkie's probably going to help him practice. A lot.

That was funny. Glad to see. Pinkie acting like a psychiatrist.

Not that i hate it, i am just a bit sad that is is probably really only a Clopfic story now.

Darling Pinkie you should of seen my Spikey Wikey with his first time, We had to call the fire department!

First? you should of seen his basket ! Cinderdragon!

Awe COME ON !

THAT DOOMIE IS A SPUNKY LITTLE BUG!

Dude needs to work on his stamina. Also, how could this story not be any less weird if not more so then some of your other stories? For example, your Celestiaphilia story, Despite being near the top of the "weird-o-meter" in my books was also very enjoyable. So hopefully the same will be true for this one.

SEQUAL!!!

Wow. Major misfire at the end.

bearly...a-and the on

barely*

hard their?”

there or then?

poor little guy was too excited! THIS IS AWESOME!!!

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All I can say is that I am looking forward to the next chapter.

Lol. Blue.

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THAT DOOMIE IS A SPUNKY LITTLE BUG!

Clop... 'Dat phrasing.

"chapter 1, he already made a reference"

been waiting to see a sequel! keep this going man, high hopes!

Stem and Fertilizer is my new favorite euphemism.

WHAT A TEASE! only 1 chapter is out I NEED MORE! i REALLY liked doomiepie, it was a new and cool shipping i can get behind =D

T-t-t-they st-stutter... t-too much to make it ... Uh. Make it. r-r-r-readable.

C-c-cut down on the c-constant st-stuttering.

Timber wolfs speak on russian? By the way, where author from?

Doomie saluted. “I said: Вы можете съесть ее позже, просто не сейчас , ладно?”

Russian. French. What's next, Aztec?

I want my first time to be special, with someone I care about, someone who loves me back, and someone who’s not afraid, right?”

At the end off the day, don't we all

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I put that throughout translate and what I got something along the lines of "you can eat it later, just not now"