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SweetyBelleluvsu


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(Not set in Emerald-verse)

Emerald and Valiant are awoken one evening to find the griffons attacking Canterlot. Shortly after the troops are sent out, Emerald finds a target and soon sets out a challenge that may cost her her life... will she accept? For the fate of Equestria and her family?

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might wanna do a spell check on some of the words.

6499347 "!ark my words Flight Path... I will be her back..."

Valiant had to duck, sweetie could pack a lunch when she was mad.

(I saw your forum post.)

Good story (although I haven't read this 'Emerald-verse' thing). Although there are capitals missing from time to time in this story. And, even though my current story suffers from it, you should try to use more descriptive details in the story, and a little more show-dont-tell.

But of course then again, half the stuff I just mentioned is stuff wrong with my stories. Anyway, good story. Followed. :raritywink:

6499412 yay! Oh, and emerald verse is the land of my ocs. Emerald isle, me lol, and all the rest. If you wish to learn more about it you can always start with cmc growing up. Oh, and welcome to the luvulots!

GREAT!!!!
SO PERFECT!!!!!!
Except for spelling :derpyderp2:

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Okay, I'll check that out later! :twilightsheepish:

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