Tirek returns, and this time, he's plans ahead of the Princesses and even Discord! He first saps their magic and banishes them to Tartarus. Afterwards, he then goes to steal every ounce of magic he can and rule Equestria with a tyrannical fist.
But there's a slight flaw with his plan. What he doesn't know, is that the Children of Harmony are planning to overthrow and destroy Tirek, once and for all. Will the children be able to stop this evil tyrant or will Tirek intimidate them into a corner?
Chapters (9)
Oh no! That bad guy is back! He's even more dangerous than Dr. Neo Cortex himself!
6150202 Yep and he's got a plan this time
Like the one Sombra is planing in A New Home IV?
6151772 Not quite, reread the chapter and you'll find out his plan
Sorry Jack, Tirek's back!
Uka Uka: MWAHAHAHA!!! Now that's a villain who knows how to handle heroes! He's even better than Cortex himself!
Whoa momma, Nathan is really acting captain, I think he's going to be a captain that's tough and doesn't take crap off anyone, wouldn't you say darkmage1997?
6153906 Right, just like his dad
6153906 Also, I need your help with coming up with a an idea for the next chapter, it'll have the children trying to stop Tirek with a trap, but it fails. Where can I have Tirek banish them too? The castle of the two sisters or Tartarus?
6154340 The castle of the two sisters, but here's how he can be defeated, Josh, Kelly, and the other children discover that when they came to Equestria, Twilight and Celestia had managed to give them the power of within friendship, so they end up going to the tree of harmony and it manages to give them rainbow power forms of their own, including Nathan, then they float up like the mane six did and blasts up a 3d emblem of the USA flag, and it blasts red, white, and blue beams at Tirek causing him to explode and be gone for good.
Good idea!
By the way, what about Toby, Timmy, Conner, and the rest of the children?
6154693 That can work
6155808 They'll go with the titans, Eris, and Nathan
6156226 Then after that, Josh and the other children manage to deliver everypony's stolen magic back to them, including the ponies that Tirek had banished in Tartarus, here's the type of Rainbow Power glowing selves the children should get.
Toby - Lightning
Nathan - Tornado
Eris - Rain
Silver Spoon - Blizzard
Kelly - Ice
Josh - Hercules Earthquake
Nyx - Hurricane
Apple Bloom, Sweetie Belle, and Scootaloo - Fire
Drake - Wind
6156414 but silver spoon and the other fillies are in the other dimension
Good point. But it might make the story too short. So we need to add new chapters before that one.
6156753 Right, so I am open for suggestions
OK. Crash Bandicoot and Aku Aku could appear in the next chapter and can help our favorite OC children defeat Tirek but found out he's not working alone.
6156958 but I don't know anything about crash bandicoot. I mean, i saw some video game walk throughs
Could I tell you stuff about him?
6159435 Well, as far as I know, Crash is a game about a bandicoot trying to rescue his island and his girlfriend from a mad scientist, and he loves to smash crates
6159435 But ok
You can add it?
6159776 I've actually got something else planned, so I'm afraid not
OOH! Final chapter is next?
6160158 Well, part 1 of the second to last chapter
geez, Tirek has the gall to assault children, yeah he's really got to go for good!
Alright now we're getting somewhere, Please don't be long on the finale.
6161204 Did you see the PM I sent you?
6161718 yes and I posted you back with a pretty awesome tweaking ending to help you with.
Ok, and maybe for the epilogue, I can use the ideas you gave me. Also, the beasts only live inside each of the Titans
Wait, you promised about Nathan losing his eye and having it replaced.
6181475 Oh, dang, I knew I forgot something! Well, time for an edit!
Nathan lost his eye?!?
6202013 And he got a Cybernetic replacement eye
How did he lose it?
6202384 I don't know, xd77 never gave me all the details, but I assume he was born without it
Anyway, when will you make another story?
6202389 Yep
I said "when", not "will".
6202438 Oh, well, after I watch the Muppets Most Wanted movie, then I'll get to work on your request
You will watch the full movie tomorrow?
6202469 I can and will, but it won't come until the afternoon
OK. I hope Toby Mason will be alright in the new story. He has suffered through many heartbreaks before, but now he will be on the run?
6202484 Well, when Toby confronts his double, I have a plan for when Silver Spoon. She goes in to her own rage shift when she learns she was dating the escaped criminal
Yeah, but George will have an ally by his side until he betrays him. The ally goes by the name of Bowser. (Not the one from Mario, you know)
And the rage also goes for the fillies, The CMC, and the Mane 6, right?
6202548 Yeah, but mostly Fluttershy, Silver Spoon, and Ashley