Celestia and the yak prince have a conversation during Pinkie's party. Turns out that the yaks' visit was not all it appeared to be...
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Awesome take on today's mess of an episode.
Eh, I'm not sure if this is good either. If a training scenario is unrealistic, it can be damaging because the person playing it will think that kind of thing happens in real life.
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It does happen in real life. Look at the trouble we're having with people coming over from Mexico illegally. They refuse to integrate into American society, and demand that we accommodate them in their desire to bring Mexico standards and practices here.
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I'm pretty sure those people aren't diplomats, and have no power over whether their country goes to war or not.
6141860 It's Equestria. Maybe it does actually happen there, or maybe the yaks are just weird.
His name is RUTHERFORD, geez... (Twilight said his name at the start of the episode)
6141995 Sorry, wasn't paying attention to that I guess
Fixed!
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Eh, I don't really like that sort of explanation. It's kind of like saying 'it's a cartoon, so of course things are different'.
In real life yaks arev quite docile and friendly
When Trollestia-being-a-troll makes far more sense than canon, you know the episode was a trainwreck. Well done.
Congratulations on your first story. May it be the first of many more.
Ehhh... I don't like the idea that Celestia thinks Twilight handling a real delegation would be a disaster. I mean, I doubt Celestia would have made Twilight Sparkle a princess if she didn't think Twilight could handle such tasks, and Twilight has handled a similar matter with Sunset Shimmer, who actually tried to kill her, and not only was the new princess successful, she actually made Sunset her faithful student. It's really out of character for someone who claimed Twilight was her equal and even called her "an inspiration to us all." The fact that the whole thing was a trick in this story makes me more irritated with not only Celestia, but also the yaks. They still caused property destruction and nearly smashed several animals, not to mention a sentient creature who's a good friend of the princesses. The grammar is good, the dialogue flows smoothly and organically, but the ignorance of the yaks' crimes and out-of-character-ness on Celestia's part take me out of it.
I really wanted the yaks to be intelligent and sophisticated, and you have successfully delivered on that desire.
6146682 Except the show clearly states Twilight has no idea how to be a princess at the end of MMC. If not the duties or mannerisms, what else could that have meant?
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Thank you guys so much!
6146682 Well, dealing with a rogue unicorn in a different world is a bit separate from a handling a delegation with all kinds of possible political repercussions. I understand your point though.
When I first saw the Yaks my first thought was "Vikings in Equestria? Hells Yeah!" After the first temper tantrum over things not being perfect I can say my hopes for the episode were shattered like the banquet Twilight had prepared for them. This story went a long way into making me feel better about it. Nice work.
6149017 I'm not so sure they're Vikings. Or at least not entirely. The cold region and tempers, along with a few styling decisions seem to be that of nordic origin, but their clothes and the name of their country seem to be that of south western Asia, like Kazakhstan and Uzbekistan.
They might be a blend of the two cultures.
Hm. I suppose that would have been a sweeter ending.
6149405 First glance type deal. It was just a foolish hope from seeing what they looked like. I saw big burly creatures that came from a colder region with helmets, horns, and beards that reminded me of Viking pictures I have seen. Since I really love Norse Mythology seeing some similarities made my hopes skyrocket...before they crashed and burned in that first meeting. To me these diplomats were just throwing tantrums like a 3 year old that does not get the gift he specifically wanted. Made it extremely hard to care.
"Playstation 3? I asked for a Playstation 4 you #$#%!" throws the console through the 50 inch plasma TV you just bought.
Very hard to care.
But you are probably right about the culture.
6146892 She has learned more since then, and to be fair, Celestia wouldn't make her a princess if she thought Twilight would hurt Equestria politically.
6147958 Thank you, although considering said unicorn directly tried to kill her, I think it would still say something about how ridiculous it would be for Celestia to think Twilight handling diplomacy would result in disaster.
6150905 Except your original comment was about making her a princess, not the likelyhood of her having learned enough about diplomacy by this point.
6154284 Those are multiple points of my argument.
An expensive piece of equipment that Twilight will presumably have to pay for or has already done so, if it isn't something of Spike's, that was trashed in the process of this stunt, and they're laughing about it. Congratulations, you've managed to make Celestia an even more callous bitch than is usual for Trollestia.
6250958 She's a princess. I think she can afford to replace a piano.
6251312 Celestia or Twilight? In fact all the stuff that the Yaks broke and destroyed in the process of this hilarious prank/learning experience for Twilight needs replacing, not that I expect that heartless sun-flanked bitch will do anything about it.No, it will be up to Twilight to fix Sunbut's messes, just like she always does. Considering Sunbutt probably hasn't bothered to raise her stipend, it means she'll be sitting in her palace, eating grass from outside the door and windfall apples from Sweet Apple Acres because she can't afford groceries.
Don't get me wrong, this is a great story. It makes a lot of sense, far more than the episode as written. In story, I just wish Celestia and Reginald would end up getting a karma laser warhead missile upside the head. (I've been reading a lot of Honor Harrington lately.)
I'm sorry, but I really didn't enjoy your story. Despite (or perhaps because of) their abrasiveness and insanity, I liked the yaks and their antics, and reimagining it all as being faked is a real downer. As for whether or not Celestia would actually set something like this up as a test for Twilight, knowing her that's anybody's guess, but I would like to believe that she would be more honest with Twilight and at least tell her the truth at some point.
Priceless! Great work!