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DuskShadowBrony
I'm a writer specializing in Age Regression stories, mental and physical. I am a MLP babyfur. There is nothing sexual about it for me. Please get to know me well before judging me or my OC.
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A combination between my favourite Netflix Anime and Age-Regression? Interesting...
I shall keep this story on my list for now.
(BTW, you can feel the shipping between Kogemi and Akane, right?)
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Oh HELL yes, I do!
this a great start to the story, I'm hopping that there will be many chapters to come
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I plan this one to be my longest fic yet. But unfortunately, that means it'll be the longest to finish, too. Updates for it will be slower compared to my other fics, unless my readers want this one to be the focus.
If I don't watch "Psycho-Pass" and read this, will I get a more unique feel of this story than if I had watched that show?
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Hmmm... I think you would, yes. But be sure to read the description if you don't watch Psycho-Pass, or it won't make much sense at all.
6141707 I read the description ^^
I should want you, you should be more concerned with admins asking you to rate your story mature for scat than people not liking your story.
That was great! I've never seen the Anime this is based off of, but this is cool!
Huh. Haven't seen the anime, but did just read the wiki-page for it. Certainly an interesting combination possibility. :D
Though just for me the 'total mind wipe' part is unpleasant but that's just my own preference for 'redemption' over 'termination', and to a lesser extent humiliation. ^^;
Keep it up though. :) I would say you're doing good. ^^
I love pyscho pass, as well as this story! Keep up the good work.
I've left a detailed comment on your FA page's copy of this, but figured I'd express my interest at you continuing the story here as well; while your writing needs polish, you've consistently had amongst the most interesting and original executions of your stories when it comes to padded ponies, and an original idea goes a long ways to making something more interesting.
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I noted the feedback, I appreciate it, but in one line, you were a bit too harsh, and pointed at me directly and said "don't even think about doing this" when I didn't even get a chance to say something. You know what assuming does...
But I do appreciate the feedback. My grammar is what I learned in college, and majored in. The rules I were taught seem to be different from what you told me, so I'm really not sure what's what at this point, but assuming you're British from your well-spoken dialogues, it may be a difference between Standard English and American English.
You think I'm original? *blushes* Heh, that's actually a really nice compliment.
Add me on skype, and I may reconsider what was discussed on fA.
good start, i'm looking forward to the next Chapter
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I didn't say you would drop the "style" card, but many years of providing feedback has resulted in me spotting some patterns (you could say it's a Punctuation Pass that shows an Editing Efficiency rating ;P ). Yes, it's an assumption, but not one for you specifically, just a catchall to let those who would do it know that I'm onto them.
I'm Canadian, actually, so besides using British spellings of some words (and then using the American ones because spell checker 'corrects' me and I just let it out of laziness now) I follow almost exactly the same rules as you do for punctuation and grammar, as do most modern authors ( https://litreactor.com/columns/top-10-authors-who-write-great-dialogue ). The only one I can think of who doesn't is Terry Practchet, RIP, and he came from a different time.
Originality is relative, but in the all-too generic "X discovers they love diapers " world of our fetish, something like this is a shower of refreshing water to a drought-stricken land.
That you haven't screamed at me for daring to point out issues is a good sign for your strength of personal character. I'll add you on Skype and look forward to helping you make the most out of this story.
Oh, and I typed this on my phone, so do forgive any obvious mistakes that might have slipped past my attention.
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Okay, I'll wait for you to add me. It has to be within the next few hours to meet the 24 hour time limit set for me.
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Contact request sent. I'm at work so replies may be slow.
I have never watched the anime before, but the story really awesome so far :D
6147520 bro you gotta make more im hooked I read this about 16 times over again
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Haha, glad you like it so much. I promise more is in the works, I'm just busy with the new Team Fortress 2 update.
You know, I am quite interested in seeing where the rest of this goes...
Oh, and I guess you already have plans to add an MLP version of Shogo Makashima, am I right?
oh im sure this psycho-pass crossover is gonna be hillarious
while i say that i dont think its gonna work right
I REALEED MORE dusk Padd storys srrysly
Please continue this. It's so good!
For future reference if you're going to add a story to the group Adult Foals and Diapered Pony Crusaders YAY! Please follow the guidelines for the folder system. If your story has the dark tag it belongs in the mature section of the folders. The dark tag implies Mature content, so please follow the guidelines next time!
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You have my apologies. I plan to remove the 'dark' tag, as I can't make dark and my foal stories mix.
6236607 No problem at all!
need lot more mares.
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Sorry, I've been gone for a while. I made a blog post on what happened to me, though.
Well I'm happy to see more of this story, but I would have liked to have had more content to it for example to see what append to the counsel ponies. still I hope their will be an other chapter soon
So, if this is accurate to Psycho-Pass, then I'm guessing that there's a pony who is EXACTLY like Shogo Makashima.
I'm looking forward to that chapter...
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tbh, this was kinda a filler chapter just so people know I didn't die or didn't explode twice. It gives me time to work on more.
Nice chapter :)
Progress is being made, always a good thing. May the words be with you, as well as the motivation to create them.
i hope see female.
I love you.
Let's say a pony has an insane CC, about 1000. Will they be regressed to a fetus?
Well I know it’s a 7 year old dead story but I did enjoy what I have read so far
interesting start
very interesting, I am intrigued
beautiful story, I’ve been trying to read the stories, I’ve come across to help me with my writers block, and I’d like some pointers for my story called “daddy discord: scootaloo the remake” since the first one wasn’t approved, give a heads up if you can help me, if thats ok