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DuskShadowBrony


I'm a writer specializing in Age Regression stories, mental and physical. I am a MLP babyfur. There is nothing sexual about it for me. Please get to know me well before judging me or my OC.

Comments ( 76 )

How the hell are people even voting on and favoriting this story? It's not even public yet.

This has a good potential. Have a flutteryay.:yay:

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How the hell did you find this O.o It's not public

5109624

Oh, lol. Wondering if you were a wizard.

5099963 You put it in a group. Speaking of, you should only put stories in one folder.

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Yes, I just now put in a group, before, it was incomplete and unreleased.

Also, there's no rule to state it should only be in one folder. If it fits in multiple folders, I put it in multiple folders. This is both a padded pony and regression story, hence the double folder.

I liked this. Believe it or not, but this is only the second "Choose-your-own adventure" padded pony story I've stumbled across.

And I have to say, there doesn't seem to be a really bad ending, even if some end up with you being regressed physically.

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I didn't want the Reader to think that there's really a 'bad ending', some of us have fantasies about being regressed. Hell, I'd resist at first, because I'd feel guilty for abandoning my adult responsibilities, but in the end, I think I'd be happier.

5210165 I liked how Luna didn't force you into it, and let you decide whether or not to participate in it. I also like she still let you make the decision of whether or not you wanted to use your diaper. I know there are some people that like the "Loss of control" thing, but I think the option of choice works better.

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There's still a 'loss of control' timeline if you follow a certain flow of actions :P I tried to appeal a bit to everyone in this.

5210212 Indeed. But most of those come from either being physically regressed, or disobeying Luna once the roleplaying begins.

I got to ending 6 and was happy :twilightsmile:
Quite a job you've done here. In fact, you've inspired me to do one of these myself.

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I'm glad you liked it.

If you're going to do one of your own, just know it's a massive pain to do, I had to manually map out each choice/timeline to make sure that I covered all possible options. Organizing and editing it was even more annoying.

5210298 Good luck. Choose-your-own adventure stories are hard to pull off in the world of fanfiction.

complete with 4k words? you can barely have 1 ending in a fic that short let alone 8......

and what site rule changes?....

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Well, if you don't like it, nobody said you had to read it. If you can do better when you're working two jobs, feel free to show me. Lastly, it's not a rule I made up, it's something the moderators told me. If you have a problem with the site rules, you can complain to the mods, not to me.

5210374 you can't fully know if you don't like something without having first indulged in it....

the only advice i can give there is to quit those workings then....

i didn't say you made up the rule , i was asking what the rule in question you were talking about is....

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Right, quit my jobs and have 0 income so I become homeless and unable to feed myself, just so I can write fics that satisfy you and only you. Great advice.

Such an interesting idea! It's been so long since I tried a published book like this. I forgot how entertaining it could be. Keep up the awesomeness ;)

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I actually cut a large amount of it out. You can see some missing sections (They don't go A-Z. Other than O, if you don't see the section, I cut it, because it didn't work)

I'm glad you like it, though

5210617 Of course, it annoyed me a bit but that doesn't beat the interesting story and fun choice your own ending game that I'm certainly a fan of. Nice job and keep up the good work ;)

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I hate writing descriptions, haha. I suck at writing them.

I know it was short, but I wanted to push this out for Nightmare Night. I promise I'll try to make Book 2 (which is already being written!) longer

Well this was cute as fuck. Nice story, not often that you see people dabble in these sorts of stuff, choose your own adventure stories I mean, and I think the scale of it fits it. Nice length, it's just a night thing. With about 4k words you could probably do a whole actual night, but this seems just as justified considering the type of story.

But yeah, fun concept and fun to read. Fetish content is tasteful and not too in your face (for diaper content anyway) and I like it.

Lovely read, 8/7 asses, such words, much story, would read again.

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Haha, thanks for your feedback! Definitely one of the most entertaining comments of the day!

5210813 Welcome, I don't do any diaper related stories involving ponies, so none of my stories are on this site. I just haven't found an idea with diapers and ponies I want to run with, but I've got other things to work on for now of fa~

But yeah, cute story is cute.

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8/7 Asses

Is that a Game Grumps reference?

This was a nice adventure book you did however there are a couple of things that are sorta...Not fair and the main one being after you agreed to do it Celestia come out of nowhere and as changing you turns you into a foal. That's.... Not right. I mean what's that like an instant game over or something. I'm not mad like i said I like it a lot i'm just saying that some things are kinda unfair and unexpected.

5210991 Yeah sure, why not.

This story has potential. Can't wait to see more.

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It's to appeal to the side that prefers loss of control. I tried to appeal to everyone I could in this fic.

5213219 Oh well i'm just saying i mean its kinda not legal (in their world) that that happens and he can't say back

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I didn't write this to be canon to the MLP universe, hence the Alternate Universe tag.

5212582 I think that's always a staple in "Choose-your-own adventure" type stories. Some choices lead to an automatic game over.

5213241 Oh, one more thing I noticed you had "Book 1" in the title your going to make a sequel?

5214506 He is. He's said so in the comments section.

"AELJDHSUX" Is best path, at least for me anyways.

Really well done how all the paths can cross use the various parts so near seamlessly but with quite different endings.

I actually wish we had something like a "scraps" folder so I could post mine in relation to my account without it being "officially" posted since it such a post would not be ment as an actual post but more like a "display" piece. Sort of like posting a screen cap of a high score in relation to a game.

Of course my "story" would be somewhat customized even further but still 90%-95% still in line with the original version with the heaviest alterations being done to section "0" in order to shift it to one of my earlier oc's and other parts mostly being elaborations.

Now in my head there is a continuation to the story produced that I could complete and probably post with full shout out (links and all) to its roots in this work but I am probably to lazy to work out all the bits that need proper joining and to smooth out various rough edges....

Oh well, Great story, may your efforts to contine this go well.

5223122 You and I are pretty much the same, but once we reach the festival I pick W. It ends with the option of more playtime with Luna in the future.

Nice one, it's much fun to read ^^

Luna needs to get laid

5258721 Easier said than done when you're the almighty Princess of The Night.

5259022 I'm pretty sure a lot of stallions would love to say the banged a royal

5259289 Well, maybe Luna's not looking to settle down just yet.

5259294 she wants a kid she could just adopt not make a repeat of pattycakes

5259305 It's not a repeat of Pattycakes, because no one is being abducted, drugged, or forced into anything against their will. You are given the choice of whether or not you want to go along with it.

5259314 in some of those endings there's brainwashing so yeah luna has issues

5259328 Most of those endings are because of decisions that you choose to make. There's really only one unfair ending, where you're surprised by Celestia and regressed out of the blue. Other than that, everything that happens, you allow for it to happen.

5259396 equestria is one fucked up place

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