This new chapter was a fun read (those 10k words just breezed by). AJ and RD instantly going into rival mode was hilarious. Also, I was hopng there'd be some FlutterMac in this story, didn't think it'd be so soon. What a nice surprise. In conclusion, you made my night
eeewwww fluttermac not gonna lie to you it's just i hate big mac i just do i wish he would die i hate him with every fiber of my body and im not fat so thats a lot of fiber i hate him in every fanfic in every episode every one has that one pony they hate big mac should die other than that good story the length of the chapter makes up for the long time spent waiting for an update please make your updates sooner
1053654 sorry its just my opinion i hate big mac but love this fic really funny drunken RD and the fact that Fluttershy likes them big made me also the way fluttershy shivered she thought iron will was big and
Huh. That's weird, because I don't see it up there with "Romance", "Alternate Universe", and "Human"... And I know I've seen stories with whole rainbows of tags, so it's not like it's limited to three...
I was not! They were awesome. And adorable. Ten seconds flat just happens when you roll with Rainbow Dash. I was surprised, though. I was thinking, is this scene going to turn sexy? No... it would have the Sex tag. And then it did anyway. I, for one, enjoyed this experience.
But I have read that some people do not, so I wanted to try and prevent that.
Anyway.
If I were you I'd take it up with a mod or admin or somebody in authority, 'cause the possibility of that happening to someone is kind of serious.
1053749 The only time a sex tag is shown is in a search results page.
If you were to search " Grace of a swan" then a story will appear harboring both the sex and gore tags, but if you were to click on it the tags would not appear on the main story page.
I learned that by definitely not looking for clopfics
I won't have these blatant accusations, I was innocently reading the timeless classic " Chef's dad goes to Ponyville" A whole comment dedicated to shameless self promotion. Aren't I just the worst? :
Well, that's a damn weird way of doing things. I find all the stories I read from author pages, the list on the right side of the front page, and the feature box. How am I supposed to know where to expect boning?
Wonder when we will see rarity and pinkie pie. Also, I don't like fluttermac, but it was very cute because they are such a good pair but something inside me doesn't like big mac. Maybe it was sweet apple massacre that ruined macintosh for me...
This is awesome. I don't know where this has been all of my summer. But I love it so far.
I see pretty much no mistakes whatsoever, it flows nicely... except the admission of love between Dash and Twilight, that was a bit rushed... but other than that, I like it. And you know what, I'm okay with the love being rushed this time around. In your story, they make quite a nice couple.
Hopefully you'll update more often than one in 3 months, but I can totally understand if real life gets in the way.
i honestly cant say i havent been interested in this. it surprises me because i dont look for this kinda stuff. people i know just send me off on quests to find random fics here or there and oh look, i stumble upon something like this. honestly, im not looking for the whole clopfic thing, but this was just so well written, well, i had to keep reading. its just great. quality job youve done here. i thoroughly enjoy this story, mostly for the writing itself, but also for the humor and 'plot' so to speak. keep up the good work, is all i can really say.
This is great, but just a quick thing: I think you slightly derped on the story image source. Right now it links to 'http://www.fimfiction.net/story/27218/MegaSweet' which just redirects here. I'm pretty sure that wasn't your intention.
Sorry if I'm being nitpicky, but Megasweet is one of my favorite artists, and I would hate to see his great work go uncredited.
Wow. What a fucking bitch. You really had me liking Dash there for a while... Sure, she was her usual, jocktardy self, but likeable. Then, suddenly, WHAM! Loathing. Just like that. Stop playing with my feelings sleepless.
Also, I find it kinda funny that you could only keep to the TwiDash for two and a half chapters before switching into fluttermac. Really got your mind focused on that pairing, huh? Oh well, I was still happily surprised to see this finally getting a new chapter! I always like some good humanized, makes me feel like less of a wierdo.
Normally i like Cheerimac, but this Fluttermac was too cute to put in words. <3
And Twi and Dash were also really awesome. I really like the visions you created with them in your fic. :D Just two questions: When does this exactly play as in, do they have holidays right now or are they´re right in the semester? And how many days passed since chapter 2? Given what Twi said to Fluttershy and Big Mac, it seems some time has passed already.
My own personal favorite thing was Iron Will with his suit cut off sleeves. I just loved how this suddenly came up at the beginning. XDDD
Though close second is how romantic-cute you made the whole love thingy between Dash and Twilight with all the vomit in there when they are in Dashie´s room. That sure takes some writing skills. <3
Can´t wait to see Rarity and Pinkie Pie after we meet AJ, plus some other like Professor Celestia, Luna and ofc Trixie and Gilda to have some ex-girlfriends/jealous enemy (stalker) of the girls.^^
How could anyone hate Fluttermac? It's so... Right... Probably one of the only wholesome ships there is. Anyways, this is so perfect and adorable, you gotta give this story higher priority, sleepless! I don't mean to say I'd rather see this updated more than I would Up in the Clouds, Down to Earth, but... I would.
While I am generally rather "meh" on the subject of FlutterMac, you have managed to do quite well with it and write a very... fitting night for the two of them. The closeness between them felt genuine and believable. I especially liked how Mac was clearly deeply concerned for her and always took the time to make sure it was what she really wanted.
1052649
...You can see it now, right?
Holy shit?! You actually updated?
>CH. 1: 2500 words
>CH. 2: 5000 words
>Ch. 3: DOUBLES OVERALL WORD COUNT
I remember when you said this was just a silly side project
I make a laughing
Fluttermac scene was both sweet and hot... like a jalapeño... I very much approve.
Also, Twilight's little confession with drunken Dash was inspired. Where do you get your ideas?
There it is! Great chapter!
This new chapter was a fun read (those 10k words just breezed by). AJ and RD instantly going into rival mode was hilarious. Also, I was hopng there'd be some FlutterMac in this story, didn't think it'd be so soon. What a nice surprise. In conclusion, you made my night
Yes.
i think i have developed a bromance for u xD, now i'll wait till i get home to read this couse i dont want ragin bonners in the office u know
Mac, why is Winona making weird OMIGOSHTHAT'SNOTWINONA!
NEW CHAPER!!!!!! YEEEEEEEEEEEEESSSSSSSSSsssssss....
That was hot.
Also, "reaching almost conversational levels of volume"
eeewwww fluttermac not gonna lie to you it's just i hate big mac i just do i wish he would die i hate him with every fiber of my body and im not fat so thats a lot of fiber i hate him in every fanfic in every episode every one has that one pony they hate big mac should die other than that good story the length of the chapter makes up for the long time spent waiting for an update please make your updates sooner
There's a Sex tag.
It's for stories with sex in them.
You should put it on this story.
Because of the sex.
NEW CHAPTER!!!
Celebratory guitar solo!
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P.S. You know you're a great writer when you get me to enjoy a fluttermac scene. Carry that accomplishment with pride.
I have been waiting all my brony life for a story like this.
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I always loved this drawing. Twilight's revenge!
1053444
Gorillas... big ape... tiny penis...
1053617
Precisely.
1052724
Yeah, I remember that, too. Just a silly side project.
Haha.
Ha.
HAHAHA.
...
1052759
Sometimes genius just comes out fully-formed. On Skype.
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Pretty sure it's tagged for sex. When I go to edit the story, the little "sex" check box is checked. So...?
To everyone else:
Thanks for reading! I always swore I'd never write a humanized thing, but here we are. And it turns out... it's fun. Who knew?
Hot Damn! Well worth the wait, Kudos man.
1053654 sorry its just my opinion i hate big mac but love this fic really funny drunken RD and the fact that Fluttershy likes them big made me also the way fluttershy shivered she thought iron will was big and
1053654
Huh. That's weird, because I don't see it up there with "Romance", "Alternate Universe", and "Human"... And I know I've seen stories with whole rainbows of tags, so it's not like it's limited to three...
Oh! I forgot to mention.
This is awesome. You're awesome. I'm going through all your stories now because you made me feel all kinds of things.
1053695
I see that, too. Not sure what's going on there - if you were shocked or offended in anyway by unexpected explicit sexytimes, I apologize.
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I like this.
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I was not! They were awesome. And adorable. Ten seconds flat just happens when you roll with Rainbow Dash. I was surprised, though. I was thinking, is this scene going to turn sexy? No... it would have the Sex tag. And then it did anyway. I, for one, enjoyed this experience.
But I have read that some people do not, so I wanted to try and prevent that.
Anyway.
If I were you I'd take it up with a mod or admin or somebody in authority, 'cause the possibility of that happening to someone is kind of serious.
1053444
Glad I'm not the only one.
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...... Uh......Wow.......... Faved.
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Anyway....aside from that, good read!
1052724>>1053654
Chapter 4 should totally be ~20k words! Keep that trend going!
1053749
The only time a sex tag is shown is in a search results page.
If you were to search " Grace of a swan" then a story will appear harboring both the sex and gore tags, but if you were to click on it the tags would not appear on the main story page.
I learned that by definitely not looking for clopfics
I won't have these blatant accusations, I was innocently reading the timeless classic " Chef's dad goes to Ponyville"
A whole comment dedicated to shameless self promotion.
Aren't I just the worst? :
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Oh.
Well, that's a damn weird way of doing things. I find all the stories I read from author pages, the list on the right side of the front page, and the feature box. How am I supposed to know where to expect boning?
Wonder when we will see rarity and pinkie pie. Also, I don't like fluttermac, but it was very cute because they are such a good pair but something inside me doesn't like big mac. Maybe it was sweet apple massacre that ruined macintosh for me...
This is awesome. I don't know where this has been all of my summer. But I love it so far.
I see pretty much no mistakes whatsoever, it flows nicely... except the admission of love between Dash and Twilight, that was a bit rushed... but other than that, I like it. And you know what, I'm okay with the love being rushed this time around. In your story, they make quite a nice couple.
Hopefully you'll update more often than one in 3 months, but I can totally understand if real life gets in the way.
That is more then just sex. Its love making.
i honestly cant say i havent been interested in this. it surprises me because i dont look for this kinda stuff. people i know just send me off on quests to find random fics here or there and oh look, i stumble upon something like this. honestly, im not looking for the whole clopfic thing, but this was just so well written, well, i had to keep reading. its just great. quality job youve done here. i thoroughly enjoy this story, mostly for the writing itself, but also for the humor and 'plot' so to speak. keep up the good work, is all i can really say.
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Well generally you can see a word in Capital letters that says mature.
Another way to expect boning is if you click "browse" and then click the clopfics category.
This is great, but just a quick thing: I think you slightly derped on the story image source. Right now it links to 'http://www.fimfiction.net/story/27218/MegaSweet' which just redirects here. I'm pretty sure that wasn't your intention.
Sorry if I'm being nitpicky, but Megasweet is one of my favorite artists, and I would hate to see his great work go uncredited.
I don't read much FlutterMac.... but maybe I should from now on
Wow, after reading this 3rd addition, I worship you.
Wow. What a fucking bitch.
You really had me liking Dash there for a while... Sure, she was her usual, jocktardy self, but likeable. Then, suddenly, WHAM! Loathing. Just like that. Stop playing with my feelings sleepless.
Also, I find it kinda funny that you could only keep to the TwiDash for two and a half chapters before switching into fluttermac. Really got your mind focused on that pairing, huh? Oh well, I was still happily surprised to see this finally getting a new chapter! I always like some good humanized, makes me feel like less of a wierdo.
Keep it up!
Normally i like Cheerimac, but this Fluttermac was too cute to put in words. <3
And Twi and Dash were also really awesome. I really like the visions you created with them in your fic. :D
Just two questions:
When does this exactly play as in, do they have holidays right now or are they´re right in the semester? And how many days passed since chapter 2?
Given what Twi said to Fluttershy and Big Mac, it seems some time has passed already.
My own personal favorite thing was Iron Will with his suit cut off sleeves. I just loved how this suddenly came up at the beginning. XDDD
Though close second is how romantic-cute you made the whole love thingy between Dash and Twilight with all the vomit in there when they are in Dashie´s room. That sure takes some writing skills. <3
Can´t wait to see Rarity and Pinkie Pie after we meet AJ, plus some other like Professor Celestia, Luna and ofc Trixie and Gilda to have some ex-girlfriends/jealous enemy (stalker) of the girls.^^
I probably missed half of this story from being tired, but I still love it,possibly more than Tron (new & old one).Keep up the smexily good work.
<3 you.
How could anyone hate Fluttermac? It's so... Right... Probably one of the only wholesome ships there is. Anyways, this is so perfect and adorable, you gotta give this story higher priority, sleepless! I don't mean to say I'd rather see this updated more than I would Up in the Clouds, Down to Earth, but... I would.
While I am generally rather "meh" on the subject of FlutterMac, you have managed to do quite well with it and write a very... fitting night for the two of them. The closeness between them felt genuine and believable. I especially liked how Mac was clearly deeply concerned for her and always took the time to make sure it was what she really wanted.
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Most dislike it cause it gets in the way of Flutterdash.
Huzzah! I finally get to read the end of the TwiDash scene!
>Dash doesn't move. Patiently listening.
No. No, you didn't...
>A snore cuts loudly through the room.
Oh, you utter bastard... How can you mistreat your favorite pony so?!
Oh, right: because it makes monsters like me laugh.
Oooooh, a FlutterMac scene!
...
Holy shit, dude.
Remember when someone suggested you tweak Romance Reports and publish it, the way what's-his-name did with Fifty Shades of Gray?
Do that with this, once it's finished. You will make all of the money.
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>HARDER!
1061317 Or they have an innate fear or hetero ships. That's sort of a thing on this website.