Everyone knows that Celestia went to the sun when Nightmare Moon came back, or did she? What if she Celestia made a friend in another world during her short term banishment, a friend that really gets her and not the princess she has to be?
I read the prologue and the first 4 chapters but the human is so Gary Oak (Stu) that it's annoying. He's rich, good looking, has nearly zero character besides his "inner darkness" and so on. I could nearly mistake him for Bruce Wayne if he didn't have that Desert Eagle. Wish fulfillment is nice, but makes a boring story. (At least in my opinion.)
I just got back to that comment, and I can see why you perceive it as that. However, you're partially correct. The original to this story I was working on had that motive before I decided to fix it with a twist to fool everyone as to what Marcus really is.
It was supposed to an April Fools thing, but I had some things to take care of.
I cannot change what you see, but I assure you that his looks are birthright. As for the wealth, I can only tell you that it was earned through some deep, dark stuff.
Not being some hitman or assassin on contracts, I promise.
That's what happens when you date a being who is over ten times your age. You can't win an argument with them when they actually try and use logic.
The dynamic between these two are... just great.
I read the prologue and the first 4 chapters but the human is so Gary Oak (Stu) that it's annoying. He's rich, good looking, has nearly zero character besides his "inner darkness" and so on. I could nearly mistake him for Bruce Wayne if he didn't have that Desert Eagle. Wish fulfillment is nice, but makes a boring story. (At least in my opinion.)
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I just got back to that comment, and I can see why you perceive it as that. However, you're partially correct. The original to this story I was working on had that motive before I decided to fix it with a twist to fool everyone as to what Marcus really is.
It was supposed to an April Fools thing, but I had some things to take care of.
I cannot change what you see, but I assure you that his looks are birthright. As for the wealth, I can only tell you that it was earned through some deep, dark stuff.
Not being some hitman or assassin on contracts, I promise.