A black alicorn boy shows up in Ponyville in a disguise. He follows the filly named Nyx and is getting strange warm feelings every then and there. He becomes friends with Nyx and her friends. They ask if he would like to be a cutie mark crusader. They say he has to be tested first since he is so new. Will he become a cutie mark crusader? What challenges will he face winning the heart of his crush. What challenges in general will he come across? I suck at summaries. I do not own My Little Pony or Nyx. Nyx belongs to Penstrokes.
Chapters (3)
Wow already 9 views. That is incredible, but not much ratings. Please if you do rate, tell me what you liked... unless you didn't like it still tell me so I can improve from that point.
I m just winging it when I create these stories. Though if I can get a story in a group I will be able to create better stories hopefully.
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Poor sap...
Look, if you feel at all like your story is gonna go down into the dumps, just remember we all started somewhere. Remember Babe Ruth, the best baseball player ever? He began as a rookie. And look at me! I began thinking no one would read my sh*t, but now I have over 120 followers and counting! You'll get better, I promise. Work towards a goal and do everything in your power to reach it!
6077698 Geez... I remember my first story. It sucked A LOT. You have no idea. If somebody read my first story, they would be contaminated with 'cringe worthy disease'. Yes, it was that bad.
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And now look at you! You're bustling in popularity!
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I wouldn't call myself popular, actually. But thanks for the compliment!
follows
Awesome
I await more great chapters
with a some
loss the "a" just pointing it out.
made and O shape
an lol.
the roof the be blue
the roof to be blue.
only mistakes in there so good job.