Rarity is having a rough day. Her friend Pinkie Pie comes to her rescue. Now Rarity has a problem: What do you do when your Prince Charming turns out to be a princess?
‘If Pinkie is going to roughhouse with Rarity, she may do so only on the condition that she helps to return Rarity to the fabulous state she was in beforehoof.’
This. This is a brilliant idea. Why did I never think of that?
2881256 Wait this is complete? I thought it said incomplete?
Well anyway this is one clopfic I really enjoyed. It wasn't just clop for the sake of clop, it had an actual story to it. And Raripie is a very underlooked ship.
2889243 When you know, you know. I wanted to propose on my third date. I waited 18 months to be sure, too many family members had gotten divorces. 16 years later... Still couldn't be happier.
I Just finished reading and. Can't wait for the sequel I really want to see how their families react and meet pinkies grandma, and again great story I'll be watching for more.
2893296 Sadly, stories with a decently written Pinkie are rare, much less ships. She's not an easy character to write for. Hell, even the show struggles at times.
In all seriousness though, Carrot Pancakes are not a new idea, they just seemed uniquely pony to me. I did find an excellent recipe that I suspect would give blueberry a run for it's money. Carrot Cake Pancakes.
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Agreed. Agreed so much.
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Skeeter The LurkerRegidarYet another great chapter
Hey! One of my favourites updated. Sweet. Let's take a looksie here and.......what?.........this....this was competed?
Hell yeah!
This. This is a brilliant idea. Why did I never think of that?
A very adorable finish. Well done.
This is THE. WORST. POSSIBLE. THING!
The story being complete, I mean. The whole thing was lovely through and through.
2881256 Wait this is complete? I thought it said incomplete?
Well anyway this is one clopfic I really enjoyed. It wasn't just clop for the sake of clop, it had an actual story to it. And Raripie is a very underlooked ship.
Absolutely fantastic. RariPie at its finest.
Why the bed room.. OH
Adorable.
I didn't think it was possible for me to like RariPie this much.
twilight's already got her eye on someone? phooey, I wanted fluttertwi. oh well.
It's Cherilee isn't it?
It's been a great ride. Thanks for writing this!
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Pinkie doesn't know what a dildo is, but she knows "Bow-chika-bow-wow!"
2883249 Straight porn is a thing Jot. The rubber object did not immediately click as being a penis.
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It's Cadence! I wish, but it can't be Twidance, because Twi can't dance. D:
Oh. It's over.
Aw.
Still, this was a really very lovely story. It's nice to see how Pinkie Pie affects Rarity in such a positive manner.
I thoroughly enjoyed this story, and would like to ask for a sequel. If it isn't too much trouble, of course.
Awesome, I have been waiting for this fic to be completed to read it.
2885456 Enjoy
There is going to be a sequel right?
I mean, this isn't an ending. It's more like... Well, it's like the slow burn equivalent of a cliffhanger.
You raise a lot more story arcs then you solve. List of unanswered questions:
Wedding Day
Wedding Night
Twilight Date
Twilight Bright (Well, okay, I meant 'can Rarity conceive' but I wanted to make it rhyme.)
Flutterwhy
Okay, not that many, it seemed like more in my head... But they're not small by any stretch of the imagination.
And so, following some unwritten rule that the universe has forced upon us, all good things must come to an end.
I wanted the next chapter so badly but at the same time I didn't xD
But this was awesome, especially that ending.. Good job
2886099 Its not the end, merely an end. There be will more stories with the same characters.
Great story! It's too bad about Fluttershy and Dash, though.
Cute and sexy story and I can't wait for the sequel but one thing kinda bothered me. Rarity proposed after just 3 months?! That's kind of crazy fast.
2889243 When you know, you know. I wanted to propose on my third date. I waited 18 months to be sure, too many family members had gotten divorces. 16 years later... Still couldn't be happier.
I Just finished reading and. Can't wait for the sequel I really want to see how their families react and meet pinkies grandma, and again great story I'll be watching for more.
2890731 In fairness, she'd been good the whole story, I had to give her one fourth wall joke or she'd never stop pestering me about it.
Oh,
I see what you did there.
If that isn't a Zelda reference, I'll eat my hand.
Also, stories like these make me wonder why people don't think Raripie is the best ship.
2893296 Sadly, stories with a decently written Pinkie are rare, much less ships. She's not an easy character to write for. Hell, even the show struggles at times.
Dude, I loved every second of your story! You alone made me believe in RariPie!
I'm sad this is over, but it opens so many more possibilities. Cheers!
2895142 I'm happy you enjoyed it
read the first chapter when it first came out but forgot to add the story to any of my lists
great work as usual, looking forward to a possible sequel
2904306 Much more than possible. Watch this space.
that... was... AWSOME!!!
I'm ashamed that i passed this up twice. You may have all my internets for such an amazing story!
2905430 Nothing to be ashamed of, until you get into a story you can't know its content, but this is how I do mature romance.
Sir, I would give you two moustaches for the amazing ending, however, I take one away for the wait and give it to Aurora instead. This one is for you:
And this one is for her:
2912235 Congratulations!
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In all seriousness though, Carrot Pancakes are not a new idea, they just seemed uniquely pony to me. I did find an excellent recipe that I suspect would give blueberry a run for it's money. Carrot Cake Pancakes.
Fluttershy being alone in the end is kind of but great story overall.
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>Give blueberry pancakes a run for their money
HERESY!
2920417 Ah, but that's what we have sequels for.
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You Sir, you write some of the best romance I have had the pleasure of reading.
This was an amazingly good one. keep up the good work!
As I go, have a Pinkie!
2925617 Glad you enjoyed it. Perhaps you'll join me again for the sequels.
2926781 SEQUELS? Yes!
This was great, you are great at writing romance. I love how you wrote Pinkie here. All around great fic and I look forward to more.
2932410 I believe in romance being enhanced by sex. I don't do porn without plot. Glad you enjoyed what you have read so far.
It's so sad... because it's over...
2933000 It's okay! I have plans for two sequels!