I quote: "a similar colorectal mask"... Dude, I'm sorry, because I really want to like this. Your style is nice, formatting ok, but... There's a lot of small errors like that, and this one made me laugh for a full minute and totally killed the mood. Please find an editor, there isn't even that much work to do. I'd have suggested myself, but I really don't have time these days, sorry...
Couldn't Twilight just use that Time Travel spell? I mean, sure her unicorn self used it once already, but now she's an alicorn. ALSO! Couldn't she just study that spell enough to make an improved version of it, use that improved version (the one that allows her to cause paradoxes, of course), and save Spike's life? I mean...The Doctor did something similar for an entire planet, so why couldn't Twilight do it for one individual?
Her name is a two word name, much like Granny Smith and Big Mac. Only Applejack has a one word name in the Sweet Apple Acre's family. _______________
The cyan Pegasus was brought out of her thoughts when she saw her friend approach the altar, a blue-maned and yellow coated Royal Guard by her side.
orange (his pony form is orange, and his human form is pale amber.) __________
This is an interesting AU of the AssassinVerse AU.
8995931 Forget that. Look at what happened when Starlight Glimmer did it to do something as harmless as to stop a race.
I'll admit that Time Travel is "always an option", but apparently in MLPVerse it usually ends in something worse happening. Even in something as tame as going back in time to warn a pony not to worry about the future.
"You bastards!" The voice of Rainbow Dash caught her attention, she quickly turned to see the Element of Loyalty slam her hoof into the bubble holding Gallant Heart. "You murdered an innocent child, A BUCKING CHILD! AND FOR WHAT?!" She screamed, continuously slamming her hooves into the bubble. All the while Gallant Heart refused to meet her gaze.
.... I'm sensing Rainbow going all vigilante on their asses and Twilight won't care.
I'm actually crying a bit.....
All it takes is one bad day...
Their all DOOMED!
To the guys that conspired to kill spike...
Well that escalated quickly, like Usain bolt quick..
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"What makes you any different from them?"
"They have something to lose."
6560561 But... but you have something else to lose to.
Fluttershy... they're a bunch of pansies and cowards who didn't have the balls to do it themselves. I'm going to make them suffer.
Tartarus hath no fury like a grieving mother, especially one on the hunt for the dead-ponies that took her son away from her.
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Colour me interested.
I just reread it and looked and the coverart. Midnight is coming...
I quote: "a similar colorectal mask"...
Dude, I'm sorry, because I really want to like this. Your style is nice, formatting ok, but... There's a lot of small errors like that, and this one made me laugh for a full minute and totally killed the mood.
Please find an editor, there isn't even that much work to do. I'd have suggested myself, but I really don't have time these days, sorry...
6556254 Hah. Klling Joke reference.
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All it takes is one bad day to drive the sanest mare alive to lunacy. And I don't mean the Princess Luna kind of Lunacy.
Couldn't Twilight just use that Time Travel spell? I mean, sure her unicorn self used it once already, but now she's an alicorn. ALSO! Couldn't she just study that spell enough to make an improved version of it, use that improved version (the one that allows her to cause paradoxes, of course), and save Spike's life? I mean...The Doctor did something similar for an entire planet, so why couldn't Twilight do it for one individual?
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Time travel always ALWAYS fucks things up
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Exactly. Just ask Barry Allen and how he ruined everyone else's lives just to be with mommy dearest again.
You... are... dark...
Applebloom >> Apple Bloom
Her name is a two word name, much like Granny Smith and Big Mac. Only Applejack has a one word name in the Sweet Apple Acre's family.
_______________
orange
(his pony form is orange, and his human form is pale amber.)
__________
This is an interesting AU of the AssassinVerse AU.
8995931
Forget that. Look at what happened when Starlight Glimmer did it to do something as harmless as to stop a race.
I'll admit that Time Travel is "always an option", but apparently in MLPVerse it usually ends in something worse happening. Even in something as tame as going back in time to warn a pony not to worry about the future.
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Same errors.
Aren't they supposed to be called drakes?
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