Another day, Another customer

It's been several years since Babs got her cutie mark. She never thought she'd ever be a manestylist at a barber shop down the corner. But... here she is! Babs, among other barbers, work for hours on end cutting, dyeing, styling, the works. But some customers are a bit... indecisive. And sometimes it takes a lot of effort to make sure her customers are satisfied.

Warning: spoilers from IDW comic issues MLP FIM #21-22, and Friends Forever #13 occur in this story.

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stardusk

stardusk #1 · Jun 6th, 2015 · 4 · ·

This was cute. It would be interesting to see you turn this into a series - Maybe of Babs trimming the manes of different background characters or something. Admittedly, I really just want to know how she would manage if a certain giant rodeo clown wanted a trim.

HeavyMetalKnight

HeavyMetalKnight #2 · Jun 6th, 2015 · · ·

6063658 Chances are... she might need a step stool. Maybe even a ladder.

RK_Striker_JK_5

RK_Striker_JK_5 #3 · Jun 6th, 2015 · 1 · ·

Quite nice seeing these two together like this. I agree with 6063658 that a series would be good. Maybe Trixie can show up again, too. ;)

Dragonspirit996

Dragonspirit996 #4 · Jun 7th, 2015 · 2 · ·

Lol, so cute Have a fave

HeavyMetalKnight

HeavyMetalKnight #5 · Jun 9th, 2015 · 1 · ·

(Hypothetical question) Should this ever have more chapters, what characters would you like to see get their hair done?

Neutron Alchemist

Neutron Alchemist #6 · Jul 2nd, 2015 · 2 · ·

Nice story. I liked to see Babs doing her job.

zalla661

zalla661 #7 · Nov 23rd, 2015 · 1 · ·

Another Day, Another Customer.

When I read this story at first I was wondering how it wold fit both Babs and Trixie together. Now at first I was thinking it would be it's own thing like an AU would typically be, but it surprised me when you mentioned the Rough Diamond robbery from the MLP comics. Hint hint, they're may favorite two so far, aside from the Sombra arc going on now.

Now, i liked how the interactions between Babs and Trixie was written out. She was basically calling Trixie a overly dramatic dame and i liked it. I wish it would have gone deeper into their lives and what they were both doing as tie went on after their adventure together. Perhaps having them talk about the event from their perspectives? It really felt a bit short conversation wise, but that's just me I asume.

Overall I give this a solid 8/10. It's great and well written, but could use some improvements I feel. All in all, good job an I'm looking forward to anything else you write.

HeavyMetalKnight

HeavyMetalKnight #8 · Nov 23rd, 2015 · · ·

6660605 Thank you for the review, sir. I honestly wished I could have read the comics; I most likely would have made it a little more in depth. I didn't know what people would think of this story, until now. Who knows? I might make a bonus chapter involving another character.

Godzillawolf