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I have to get them back That one thought ran through Sly's head since the Thievius Raccoonus was stolen. That is until one day he found Silver Dust, a small Pegasus colt that shared his fate.

Warning: Takes place in The Sly Cooper universes and is an alternate universe so there will be many changes to the Sly Cooper cannon.

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(Also believe it or not I drew every thing in the cover image except the Cooper logo and the background. Yes that includes the text. I know this was unnecessary information but I need to brag to someone)

Chapters (6)
Comments ( 32 )

And here we go!!!!! This story is so epic! I can't wait to see what comes next. Plus it is about time someone brought fresh Sly Cooper fanfiction to this site.

umm, just wondering, are talking magical ponies regular in this world?

Their ponies, this is top secret but they actually come from another dimension.”

“What?” Carmelita said, breaking her professional attitude.

“Yes, well, a portal opened up on a small island a few years back and Interpol was quick to set up a headquarters there

ok that makes more since.

6236926 it's good to hear feedback, especially when the story's fan base is as slow moving this one, (not to mention the dislikes vs. likes) so thanks once again. If you have any ideas for the story I'm all ears.

6236979 well, to be honest, the writing style so far are not as good as others, but I do see the quality slowly getting better and this has a lot of potential to being the best Sly Cooper crossover yet.:twilightsmile:
It is very creative and loving, my only major grip is how easily the Cooper Gang says 'oh well' with the fact that they met a being that is suppose to be myth.
may I suggest, Bentley asks Silver about his kind (I'm sure his parents told him that) and Silver demonstrates his capabilities, the most obvious is flying, but I would like to imagine Bentley's face when he learns about Silver's control over weather, being as logical as he is. but you don't have to, this is your story and I like it so far, keep it up and I think I'll Fav this.:twilightsmile:

6237034 the thing is while it is odd they live in a world of anthropomorphic animals, and there are other ponies in their world so it's more like meeting a rear species as far as they know. Also Silver was born here, and while he knows a little about his race, he knows very little about Equestria as a result. (the dusts came through when the portal when it first opened 10 years ago and Silver is 8) also I edited the pert where it says a few years to say about 10 years thanks to you pointing this out, See you are helping already. Thanks:twilightsmile:

6237238 sweet,:scootangel: glad I could help.
but come on, think about it, Bentley trying to disprove Sliver's clam to magic (I mean, I know {now} that he was born in Sly's world, but I think his would know a good bit of his culture as his parents where born on Equestria; plus, there is a strong possibility that they taught him how to fly so why not whether control? but I would understand if his parents didn't told him about there origins.) it would be funny to see his growing frustration of trying to find science in that,:rainbowlaugh: but again just a suggestion, not a request.

6237954 he can fly and his mother being a unicorn could use magic. However Silver wouldn't think twice about that and Bentley wont be seeing any magic until he meets Twilight. As for flight, that wouldn't be surprising since Silver has wings, however the weather control, well lets just say Bentley will question it when he sees it.

Ko big fan of Sly Cooper and love that you base the story of the first game. Oh and I hope your excited about the new Sly Cooper movie in 2016.

6361242 thanks and just to let you know I'm eventually moving past the first game on to the rest. As for the movie, I'm not to confident in it because it's not being made or supervised by Sucker Punch or Sanzaru as far as I can tell. Still I do hope it's good and will most likely see it. It's just that movies based on games have a pretty bad rep, the only one I confident in is the Ratchet & Clank movie, and only because Insomniac is directly involved.
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It's no fun being a skeptic:ajsleepy:

Ko well even when some movies are base on games or comics they still try their best.

KO when's the next chapter I want to see more of this awesome adventure.

6420558 soon just making some last minuet correction. it should be up tomorrow. Unfortunately it is very sort. I have been busy with collage, my YouTube channel, and job intervenes, so I haven't been able to write as often. However this chapter portability would have been the same length either way that explanation was more about the wait. still how you enjoy.

6424426 KO hope you continue this story no matter how long it takes.:rainbowdetermined2:

KO awesome third chapter hope the action continue and is Carmerltia gonna the mother cause that would be cool.

6425781 KO hope the next chapter comes soon and hope that Carmalita becomes the mom.

6425781 KO please say the next chapter is coming soon and Carmalita is gonna be the mom. :pinkiecrazy::pinkiecrazy::pinkiecrazy::rainbowdetermined2:

6560825 The next chapter is coming along slowly. I've been very busy lately and as for Carmalita being the mom, it's way too soon for that to happen. If you what some spoilers, look at the games. while there is many changes form the canon, I am basing it off of the games' story.

Anyway, please be patient, while I'm happy to have such an enthusiastic fan I am slow to begin with and very busy this mouth settling into my new job and I also have another fan-fiction to write.

P.S. I've been wondering, why do you start every comment with KO?:twilightsheepish:

6561081 KO well it's kinda my catchphrase I do that all the time on my phone texting too. :pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::rainbowdetermined2:

6561081 KO hope your doing well working on the next chapter. :pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::rainbowdetermined2:

Bentley lead the group over to the clerk, whose name tag read Sara. "Hello," Sara smiled, "and welcome to the Lost Triangle Resort, the only way to visit the triangle and avoid getting lost. How can I help you?"

“Of course, Sara said and she typed on her computer. “Do you have a reservation?”

Umm, I think your missing something.:derpytongue2:

6806880 thanks it was a transfer error. it's been corrected

6806959 KO awesome chapter, looks like the Cooper gang are gonna have a little hard with Carmalita around. :pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::rainbowdetermined2:

Updating? Wow I didn't expect that. Welcome back to the fold then.

KO awesome chapter, Sly and the gang will have some difficulties of finding a way near the villain they're searching for and not get caught by the police. :pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::rainbowdetermined2:

(Also believe it or not I drew every thing in the cover image except the Cooper logo and the background. Yes that includes the text. I know this was unnecessary information but I need to brag to someone)
Well my friend that is impressive

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