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This is really good for a first story.
I can see a few tweaks and parts that could use some little tidbits and what not.
One minor spelling error that I didn't notice until I read it twice.
So overall rating is 7/10. Would read again.
Great job!
This is pretty random. Fluttershy, and the Mane Six, are out of character though. Fluttershy doesn't like attention, and the Mane Six wouldn't abandon her because of one pony badmouthing her.
I'm almost afraid to ask but... Why is this marked as incomplete?
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Oh, I just need to fix some stuff, thats all.
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I thought the point of Fan Fic's were to make stories, correct? It's random because
1) it's my first story, and
2) It actually has the random tag on.
3) It's part of my "Opposites" series
Hope you enjoyed. Even if it was too random.
Maybe me gusta. Maybe no me gusta
this is nice for a first story
have a like
6005878 I didn't mean anything bad by calling it random, random humor's great.
What a great story! I really enjoyed the end, it seemed to flow more natuarly there! 8/10!
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I know! Sorry, I get defensive easily.
This is the best story i read so far especially for a first story !
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Aww, thanks.
Wow this is a great story! I love it!
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Thank you. :3
That was a cute story! I feel like the randomness of it worked really well!
Awww, so adorable!
Great story!
Didn't see that coming. Should've. Didn't.
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Thanks you!
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Yup, you should've
Infinity Shade told me to read this. I do not regret it.
6391839 Aww, thanks! I need to tell Infinity thanks to...
I like it. We need more stories with Flutters and Discord doing their cute antics.
I actually haven't read this story yet, I just wanted to help you reach your goal of 30 comments on one story. So I found your story with the most views and commented on it.
Okay now I have read this. It is a really great story for your first one. Good job.
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Thanks for helpign me rech the goal! :D Glad you liked the story. :3
7102556 your welcome
Good story I hope there are more like it.