Pinkie's Cannon

Twilight wanted to find out how Pinkie's cannon worked. She expected a simple, logical explanation.

Boy, was she way off.

You can find the cover, and other amazing art here.

Takes place after A Canterlot Wedding Part 2.

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LightningBass94 #1 · Jun 13th, 2015 · · ·

This was riddled with grammatical errors, and the whole "Pinkie breaks the fourth wall" shtick is overused, but I actually did enjoy this. It's a light read, and it made me giggle a couple times. It definitely tickled my funny bone. I'm a firm believer that anything under 3,000 words is too short to effectively make use of a plot, but that's what's wonderful about this. It's actually the perfect type of story to be so short: plotless humor. I wrote a similar story once to break my writer's block. Anyway, keep writing. You're pretty good. Your grammar does need work though, and I suggest touching up on those skills; however, it's not abhorous. That's always something that can be worked upon. Keep it up, and thanks for the read.