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TheTwinsAdventure: The Rainbow Factory Escape

Flame visits Cloudsdale for the Annual Flying contest. But ends up getting her best unicorn friend and her locked up in Equestria's most dangerous place, The Rainbow Factory.

Chapters (3)

The Weather Factory Tour · 16th May 2015 · 567 words
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The Capture · 17th May 2015 · 534 words
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The Following of Death · 15th Jun 2015 · 879 words
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BaryonBrony

BaryonBrony #1 · May 18th, 2015 · · · The Capture ·

Okay, I try to read as many Rainbow Factory fics as I can, but about 90% I feel are just... blah. It almost always results in a downvote. It's got that "stigma," you know? I'm not getting that vibe here. This is nice, albeit starting off short. That right now is in fact my ONLY complaint. It's short. I find myself downvoting Rainbow Factory fics on principle and you have proven to be different. I commend you, but all I ask is that you go for some slightly lengthier chapters. Everything else, good! Surprisingly so! Bravo!

TAKE YOUR UPVOTE! FAV'D, BARYON NINJA POOF! *poof*

PegasisterTwinsAdventure

PegasisterTwinsAdventure #2 · Jun 15th, 2015 · · · The Capture ·

Thank you for giving me some feed back on my story. I will try harder to lengthen my chapters, but the only reason the are short is because I am very busy and have limited time. Thank you again.

Princeling