50 Years before the events of Fallout Equestria, a monster falls in love with his victim and becomes best of friends with his hunter. Talk of a legendary Raider King brings pariahs from all over the wasteland to the town of Ponyville.
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Will you be preoccupied with fallout 4 like some of the other FoE writers?
6620882 I'm worried about what I see in Fallout 4, because from what I am seeing thematically, it is looking like it will turn out to be the Anti-Fallout 2. It looks like they did great things to enhance game play and making the story telling more convincing, but I worry about it as a Fallout game. Anyway, I'm in a transitory period between computers and jobs. I am probably going to be preoccupied with finding a job. Still, I'll be watching from the side lines.
You really cannot blame the government for pointing that out. The bureaucrats are in the right for once.
If I had to be honest, that was the worst I had seen of wordplay from Tumbleweed's narration. It just has no appealing wit, and it proves a destructive break from the flow of the paragraph.
Savvy as always, Tumbleweed. Nice of you not to ever act uncharacteristically stupid for plot purposes. Good job!
Now there is another winner of a line!
In his arrogance, Tumbleweed forgot an important wasteland lesson: do not anger the person providing you medical services.
'A spell of pause'? A period or break of a pause? Not that the two words have the same definition, but they are close enough to make this bit seem redundant.
At last, Tumbleweed realizes how to reason with a character like Calypto. With the zebra acting as judge, jury, and executioner, the only way to convince him would be to use his own twisted logic against him. Hopefully, Tumbleweed does not forget that fact in later interactions. It could be a good Chekhov's skill.
And that wraps up a pleasant, self-contained chapter all about exploring Tumbleweed's relationships with his new companions. It brought in some much needed bonding between Calypto and Tumbleweed, in order to convince the reader exactly why Calypto's survival should mean anything to anyone. Their shared 'stallion moment' at the end was a real treat as well. The interactions between those two were executed brilliantly; there was not much for development, however, between Tumbleweed and Scapegrace. That was a little disappointing, given how the opportunity was just lying there.
As a breather chapter, this one does really, really well at maintaining the spirit, wit, and passion of the story purely through the characters, as a story should always manage to do. While some choice lines and missing phrases proved a little distracting, they were but nitpicks overall.
A rather short one, but calypto and Tumbleweed have a newfound understanding, and that's a bonus