Spike does not notice, but he has more influence on ponies lives then he knows. Acts of kindness can change a pony's world, but for him, its just another normal day.
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willun
It's been a long time since I've written any kind of fanficiton. Any input is appreciated.
willun
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This looks like a nice start to a good story. I suggest maybe find an editor to clean it up a bit to make it even better.
Spike and Sweetie Belle = adorable couple.
A lovely story with hidden depths. Spike understands Twilight's unicorn magic, so he understands Sweetie Belle to some degree.
Editorial note: in many places in this story, you can replace Spike with "he" or "him" - as long as the action hasn't shifted to someone else, there's little reason to remind the audience who you're talking about, especially when he's the only male character in the story.
A lack of Spike stories? I know how you feel. . .
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I lost it
Raritys egg
Her day
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Apple Acres. + Great Apple Orchards = Sweet Apple Acres
great story but you should get the names and spelling right. for example: is cask supposed to be desk or cake it looks like you combined the 2
I'm sorry.
I've been trying to stay with it (the story) but the dialog just keeps getting to me. It's just too emotionless to me. Robotic, you could say.
I just can't imagine characters talking that way and that's more my fault than anything. I will advise you to get a betareader and wish you well on your continued writing exploits.