Spike, as we all know, loves Rarity with all his heart. Yet, time and time again, he's reminded that he could never be hers. Even if he were to wait until he were old enough, she would be dead by the time that came around. So, Spike makes a wish on a star that he could have a chance to be with her...
Be careful what you wish for, Spike.
Crossover with the movie Chronicle
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I'm going to read this and then I'm probably gonna hate you. Lets hope between those things I get a fantastic story to read though.
I've been waiting for this for far far too long. Well done.
After seeing just the title and the crossover tag, I assume it has some Pony vs. Predator action. EDIT: Nope. Also, the only movie I remember coming out around now is The Dictator. When does Spike get the beard?
Pretty interesting so far. Can't wait to see where it goes
Movie? o3o
Glowing meteor? Nosebleed? Sh*t, Spike just got radiation poisoning.
Ah, so it is Chronicle. Good, I love that movie.
Can't wait for more chapters!
Okay so this looks awesome! I'm still gonna hate you by the end of this I'm sure cause the tragedy tag usually has that effect on me (is it so bad I want everypony and Spike to be happy). I'm intrigued by Spike's foresight into his growth and lifespan most people feel the need to have Twilight or someone bring it up in these situations. Anywho, keep it up can't wait for more. Oh, and we all know the nose bleed is because Spike thought of Rarity in the shower at that moment.
599990 You're still way off. Read the description
601522
That was a joke.
ooohhhh an adventure
I love it when someone acknowledges how dragons really grow in the Poniverse.
I swear i will hate you if i dont get a happy ending.
But dam its good so far. so 
600692 Yeah, Chronicle!
cant waint
i need moar chapters
614082 Well, good things come to those who wait!
Also, I'd like to thank the person who FINALLY disliked this. It was starting to freak me out that no one hated it. The dislike actually makes me feel better.
Would you mind giving me a reason as to why you didn't like it, so that I may improve upon my mistakes?
the only reason twilight says spike is too young is because she is jealous of rarity and wants spike...or is keeping spike down so she can get a shot at rarity...either way you look at it twilight is evil and should be sent to the moon/ encased in stone...or both
663418 Oh.... Kay....
A bit of a weird conclusion
663933im not sure he's the one who disliked it i like his sense of imagination tho
btw is the next chapter coming soon not to be rude but it's been like forEVER 
i wanna know what happens 
730556 Yeah, sorry. It is coming. Check my blog post for more details
Great story so far can't wait for more.
Wait dont tell me. Spikes a pony.
759036 This guy has the right idea
MOAR!!!!!!!!!!! i need moar
!!!!!
759036 woops brain fart.
Damn your cliffhanger! I'm literally on the edge of my seat. Good story, bro.
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Spike can go Super saiyan now thats what im talking about.
I gues he looks a bit like this
http://derpiboo.ru/46013
Just go to the site it wont show the pic
922444 Remove the wings and you have an accurate depiction, my good sir
922461 Alright badass Spike is badass!
922461wait is big mac tall on two legs or four because. What i really want to know is if rarity or any of the mane six stand on the back legs will he be shorter or taller?
Spike asks Rarity out... fuckin' boss. She can't say no now.
You have a formatting error at the end it seems.
Also, I wonder if the meteor gave him super powers like Fire breath... wait a minute.
Bit of a quick asking out, but hey, confidence +3 from Meteor aura!
922493 They're taller standing on two legs as seen in Dragon Quest. So he would be shorter in comparison.
922612 I thought so I always wanted to know that when people would say as tall as big mac or celestia. Wait should you not be working on your stories i really want to read them
922751 ... shh. I read this while I was working today though. Can't really work and write, to many pauses.
YAAA spike asked rarity out cant wait for the next chap... i actually just watched chronical today i hope spike isn't gunna be the one to go insane, although that would probably make for a better story lets just wait and see what dakln has planned for little spiky wiky
Aww YEAH!!
Now this is real nice.
922603 Can you elaborate on this error so that I may fix it?
931829 It reads like this.
“Yes, and also, this new energy gives me confidence! I feel... Good. Great! More than myself!” Spike
turned to Rarity. "Rarity, I know this is kinda sudden, but..." and then went down on one knee. “Will you go out with me?”
See the large gap between the two Rarity's and the weird paragraph break in the middle of a sentence. Easily fixable.
931914 Thanks. I'll get right on that!
936857 Happy to assist.
936866 How about now?
936876 It looks the same
936879 Well, there isn't much I can do about it, then!
936884 The spaces should just be a simple matter of erasing um I would think.
936890 Yeah, I tried that. I'll just try to avoid it in the next chapter...
936897 Strange. Oh well, I'v seen people with dozens of those in one chapter and be like, I don't care. Yours seems more the oddity.
936937 Thanks. I'm glad your enjoying the story so far.
For you sir, a mustache.
936943 Thank you. Though, I think Spike would prefer I not rip it off his face.