My little butterfly.

Not everyone goes in an epic journey, not everyone has an epic tale to tell. Some just appear, some things just happen. Sometimes a few words, some kindness and a kiss can create a miracle.

Sometimes all you need to know is that all you need is some love, no matter what you are.

Cover picture created by V-D-K. Hope you don't mind

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Dusty Hooves

Dusty Hooves #1 · May 7th, 2015 · 1 · ·

Yes, changelings do.
A thoroughly enjoyable read. Have a thumbs up!

thisistheusernameichose

thisistheusernameichose #2 · May 7th, 2015 · 1 · ·

What's going on with the word count?

Uros

Uros #3 · May 7th, 2015 · 1 · ·

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Thank you ^^ Happy to hear you enjoyed it :3

5949494

I honestly have no clue o3o/ It doesn't seem to want to change, but I don' mind too much.

Dandle

Dandle #4 · May 7th, 2015 · · ·

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No! Take mine instead!

Gigatonic

Gigatonic #5 · May 7th, 2015 · 1 · ·

I don't know about any else, but for me it sounded poetic.
:')

nioniosbbbb

nioniosbbbb #6 · May 7th, 2015 · · ·

Her fear of her queen finding.

Why would she do anything?

Anyways heartwarming read. I wanted more.

jojuja

jojuja #7 · May 8th, 2015 · 1 · ·

Wonderful, and simple. While I do love a good long narrative, something short and sweet feels right tonight, thank you.

SCP-096

SCP-096 #8 · May 8th, 2015 · 1 · ·

Only chapter: 1,047 words. What FIMfiction says:624 words. You got an error FIM. Right off the bat.

Uros

Uros #9 · May 8th, 2015 · 1 · ·

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Hah! I'll take every thumbs up >:3! Thankyoush ^^

5951447

Oooh thankies a lot for the compliment :3

5951558

Thanks ^^ Though why fear? Well, if you look at it from the point of view of a drone that got someone that cares for him/her without any kind of disguise... Well, you could understand a bit of fear when it comes to your queen probably more than ready to exploit such 'food' source.

5953111

Thanks a bunch :3! I hardly do short things, I tend to focush on longer, more detailed stories, but I just had this one bottled up in my head and it just felt right. Happy to hear you enjoyed it ^^.

5953545

Yea, tried updating it a few times, but it doesn't seem to give a darn. Could be worse I supose.

nioniosbbbb

nioniosbbbb #10 · May 8th, 2015 · · ·

5955040 Or maybe it may change her mind on whether changelings can coexist with other species *shrug* depends on the kind of Chrysalis you would use.

Sarcastic Brony

Sarcastic Brony #11 · May 8th, 2015 · 1 · ·

I couldn't finish this story. I had to stop only after a few paragraphs and I'm going to tell you why. As poetic or whatever it may be. I can't stand stories like this. Everything is being implied and not lived. You talk about things happening and yet we never get to read about them. The idea would be a good one in its own right, but I think you blew it. You decided to go with a shorter and somewhat heartfelt tale about two souls that met and came to love each other. However, it has less of an impact. Because there was no real journey for the reader to experience. I in turn stopped caring about the story and that's why I stopped.

I won't downvote this, but I won't upvote it either.

Uros

Uros #12 · May 8th, 2015 · 1 · ·

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Hey, can't say you aren't right but can't say you are either. That it blew or not depends on the reader and it is an opinion I'll respect. I don't do short stories since I prefer longuer ones and, as said, I did this in this way because I had it in my head and wanted to just write something simple that I considered cute. You are perfectly allowed to not enjoy it as anyone else, and I am sorry you didn't enjoy it. I do thank you for the time you took to write a comment though, as well as your sincerity :3

The Infinity Doctor