I love My Little Pony and Littlest Pet Shop. My favorite ponies are Rarity and Rainbow Dash. I love to write fanfiction, but I need to learn to pace better.
Gleaming Gem is a high class jeweler, and she is invited to the Canterlot Garden Party. Unfortunately, many of the ponies aren't aware that she's taking a day off from her job. She hates letting other ponies down, but she didn't go to the party so she could work more.
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Uh;
Are they Ponies or Humans?
Just had too point out these as thy stick out in the crowd of words here.
No tags at all, why?
The Summary needs something called Paragraphs.
Now I would love to actually get to know your Jeweler; Gleaming Gem.
Well, I've read it. It was alright, but I think you need a proofreader. There are several mistakes throughout the story, and I think this would be classed as a vignette, not a story. It was good for a quick read, and for an introduction of Gleaming Gem, though.
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No one is not only specific to humans. They are ponies. If they were humans, they would have the human tag.
5898486 Finally, there is at leas one tag now.
I got confused when you mix two words that specifically refers to human, then pony in the same expression. Yet, it should be tagged, if there was any humans in the story.
Since the story is marked complete, I don't expect any following chapters, correct?
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Correct. I prefer writing short fanfictions. I don't know how to add tags.
I can't write. All my fanfictions are boring or terrible like this one. I will never write a good fanfiction. Most people can get good ratings in minutes, and I'm lucky to get two, If that, in an hour. I'm not sure why I still waste my time writing.
5898566 Writing short stories is just as good, or bad as writing longer once. At least you are writing. Actually it is all about the quality of the story.
What is it about the categories you have problems? Ideally, it should be a part of creating the story as you set up the story. Once the story is up, you have a good idea as to what the story is going to be about.
5898560 Sometimes it is in the Presentation, how you word the description of the story. If you get a better Summary, you get a better Received story in the process. This is the first chance to win your Audience. The name, the Description/Summary, you see before you actually choose to read the story.
What words have been in the show, but are they the ideal words at any given moment? Do we have to take after all the worst moments of the show, just as an excuse for writing a bad story? Pick the best parts and make use of these.
Oh, and on the topic, never use these kinds of words in any instance, when you don't know the others you are talking to or about. You certainly don't know me well enough to use such words.
5898718 Just work on it. If you get the right story idea and make your best out of it, you just may manage to get that one story.
On the other hoof, you may be experiencing drawbacks from your reputation. Ponies and people alike see your name and imagine a story along the image they have of you.
Gleaming Gem's character information. (She is not much like me. Brush Stroke is most like me as he is my Ponysona. Yes, that fanfiction with Brush Stroke was self insert. It's still a better rating than this one...)
Name: Gleaming Gem
Nicknames: None
Gender: Mare
Age: Adult
Species: Unicorn
Height: Slightly Above Average
Weight: Average
Hometown: Canterlot
Current Residence: Canterlot
Occupation: Jeweler
Mane Color/Style/Length: Pink and Purple, medium length
Coat Description: Violet Blue-ish
Eye Shape/Color: Similar to Rarity's, dark blue
Accessories: A fancy dress or a necklace on occasion.
Allegiance: None
Cutie Mark: Two diamond rings
Special Talent: Making Jewelry
Family: High Society ponies.
Friends: Several friends, mostly unicorns. She prefers to be friends with other high class ponies.
Personality: Sophisticated, well mannered, elegant.
Flaws: Somewhat of a snob, materialistic, hates rejection.
[Character History]
She was born into a wealthy family in Canterlot. As a pony born with a silver spoon, she rarely had to do anything as a filly. She loved the jewelry her parents gave her, and she frequently drew pictures of them. When drawing wasn't enough, she wanted to learn how jewelery was made. Her wish was granted when she was taken to a ring shop. She eagerly watched the jeweler make a ring, and he let her try to make jewelry herself. She tried to make a ring, but it was poor quality. Still, the jeweler said that she did better than most ponies on their first try. Later, her parents bought a jewelry making kit for her. She continued making jewelry until she was skillful and earned her cutie mark. She took over the ring shop after the old owner left and turned it into a shop for a variety of jewelry. Today, she still owns the jewelry store and makes jewelry for many ponies.
[Current Home]
She lives in a fancy house in Canterlot and creates jewelry for a living.
[Powers List]
Basic unicorn magic
Ability to mold solid objects, specifically metals
5899009 From the way you put it, it sounds as if you had that already, if it is a disease you can actually contract?
You did notice that the response is a reaction to several different responses in the first place, right?
Oh, and a final note, why did you expect to have a down-vote? note that I did not do it.
5899462 With this detailed a Bio's, you could as well make more stories with her.
I like this and would be interested in seeing more
I am going to write another one, but this time, it will be on my computer rather than my phone. Even when I proof read on my phone, I miss a lot of mistakes.