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SparlightTwarkle


I left the fandom 8 years ago and idk who tempest is. My writing is only compliant with the first few seasons plz don't sue me

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Princess Twilight Sparkle travels to an abandoned ancient castle along with the Royal Sisters in order to investigate reports of inexplicable incidents that have been taking place there, suspected to be the work of bitter spirits. However, she has no books, or almost any source of information to provide her with leads.

Almost, except for a pure white teapot.

2023 edit: I started this story 8 years ago. I'm continuing it on a whim. My writing style has changed since, but most likely I won't be redoing/tweaking/editing the original 5 chapters. Hope you enjoy anyways!

Chapters (9)
Comments ( 17 )

Not a bad start at all. I've added the story to a couple of groups in hopes of getting this some more attention. Keep it up - love to see more!

Do consider adding a Source for that cover art. It's a very specific scene, and it makes me think the story was inspired by the picture - was it? Nope, the other way around, I see. An author that can actually write and produce wonderful cover art - nice combination!

Curious, and just slightly disturbing. I'm hoping twi shares this teapots marking, maybe the others might recognize it.

Every Sunday has passed.

Glad to see the Romance tag getting some exercise. Playful ghosts put in an appearance too.

Good show on the artwork! I hadn't thought to look for a DA account.

One strong plant to grow through stone so fast!
Ghost gardener?

I'm not sure where this is going on the romance side...
It's added to TwiLuna romance but there's this kind of a thing going on between Celestia and the dragon...
And Luna seems to be tad irked by that...
Did she imply that she likes Twilight just to get back at Celestia? Is TwiLuna just bait?

On another note great idea for the mechanics behind the world.

6094674 we must go deeper... twiliception..... :pinkiehappy:

It was interesting, curious and thrilling. Apparently it is dead too. You planning on updating this someday?

This is looks interesting. I’ll look into this when I have time (and better Wi-Fi, too).

Blessings!
-Davidtin

Eight years I waited for this update! Many thanks and much appreciated. Looking forward to see how the rest of their story unfolds.

Aww, I think this would be about Tempest pulling a beauty and the beast while Celestia makes the Bateman meme face

Interesting start.
I had spotted this story some time ago and left it thinking it was a dead one... but...
Since this has recently seen updates, I think I'll continue reading once I have a bit more time.

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