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Is there a way Jerry can free himself once it is over?
8190140 Perhaps if he found a way to break his connection to the Tower Heart. The Tree of Harmony did some damage, but it may be possible to use it more accurately to either outright destroy the Heart or simply severe its connection to Jerry.
Mind you then you have a bunch of pissed off minions to deal with...
If the person known as Eye of Fate goes out of bounds...
He will not be left without punishment
I am watching him... and he will feel my wrath if he displeases me
8190517 *chuckle* well...thats the tricky part. How can you punish him-- if he knows everything that could happen? He is called the 'Eyes of Fate' after all.
8190221 Weeeeellll, thats the problem. If the Heart is destory-- then it might cause a large explosion, that could cause a lot of damage, like in Overlord 2. But...server the connection is even more tricky, as while the Tower Heart is a artifact-- it is a very old and powerful artifact. Granted not as old as the Tree, but still as old. Hard to server a connection between it and the Overlord. And you're right, the minions will be pissed...but heres one thing you need to ask.
When you play the role and wear the mask for so long, even if its a short time to some...are you able to take it off, if it's now part of you now?
8190140 Free himself? well...that depends, can he even know how to take off the mask that is the 'Overlord'?
8190648 oh... but i am a fateless one....
I am a blind spot that he cannot see no matter how he tries or wants....
I am without a fate... no other than the one i decide to have.... and it is in a constant state of shifting... he may see in more dimensions than a mortal... yet even so, he would lose any semblance of though, sense of self, awareness... if he were to look in to my mind... or try that is...
*sigh* this chapter is so rough, it's hard to sit through. Not taking the poor grammar and spelling into account... the story moves a little to quickly I my opinion. Last chapter Jerry just got back from the Crystal empire. And here we are a few days later chasing down the mysterious sea gundam. Half a chapter that gave us barely anything new. Then all of a sudden we're in Canterlot jumping into the the meeting with Magic. It was hard to get a feel of his character because Magic dominated the discussion. The openness between them feels off to me, Jerry shouldn't have trusted them so quickly, especially after finding out that Magic could read him so easily. It wouldn't have been hard for Magic to manipulate Jerry, and Jerry would never have known if he was or not. On the other side of the coin having voiced his non evil intent could have put Magic in danger. Especially if Inverted Color dude finds out and deems it against the rules. Jerry is probably not the type to consider these things but I feel he is going with the flow a bit too much... hopefully he realizes it before it's too late.
8190702 *dark chuckle* well...let just say there is more to the Eyes of Fate than you realize.
8190846 and the same can be said about me...
*grins with a wry smile*
*sigh*
that seems like the same thing also you're missing a "do" in front of the "you".
missing the "Any" also never put a period in front of an "and"
dominating her
He's leading a minion horde and essentially the lone soldier on the front line of an army of mind controlling slavers the fact that he had time to learn her name between the rage fueled mental breakdown and what I can only assume are continues PTSD nightmares about the slaughters he's committing on a semi regular basis. Hell I'd expect him to call her "women who makes me feel better when killing time is done".
Are the minion possession stones going to be a thing cause if he finds one in the crystal caverns a stealth mission through canterlot as a green could be fun.