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What does he do
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You mean him going to the library?
This chapter is full of weird tense errors and strange sentences.
Este es el primer Caída de Equestria que voy a leer
This is interesting to get catch of story. But man I really lookig foward to this
The sentences have alot of weird tense errors that make reading some bits hard, besides that it's pretty interesting so far
Wow off to a great start
Do you mean 'lightning'? Thunder is the sound.
This fic is awesome! Oh my gosh I love good hearted villian characters. Especially because they subvert tropes so well. This is great!
Ok reading further on wtf. First of im really hoping the mc goes doomslayer and frees the slaves. Second like halfway throught this first chapter the grammar took a huge nosedive and is nearly unreadable. Im hoping this is fixed soon. Thirdly the whole entertainment thing is kinda meh, would be better if it was just unkown
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Well, expect more to come.