• Member Since 11th Jul, 2011
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Midnightshadow


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Rainbow Dash wants to be the best - the fastest, the strongest, the most adventurous. She decides to fly further and faster than any pegasus before her, in search of an old legend; the summer lands, the mythical place where it is always summer, always thought to be nothing but a dream.

Where she goes, she finds something she did not expect.

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This story was written a while ago as a one-shot. I'm not entirely happy with the length - there was more I wanted to tell but I couldn't fit it in without it out-staying its welcome. Since I'm adding my fics here, I decided to add this one too. Hope you enjoy! As always please comment and rate if you liked it (or if you didn't).

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Comments ( 10 )
#1 · Nov 10th, 2011 · · ·

where is the summary?

Basically, Rainbow Dash launches herself into space. A nice read.

28958
sorry, I added it now.

Cute, nice and short. Kinda wondering about the Luna tag though.

1355777
Oh, that's interesting. I thought I'd removed that. It was from a longer version which never got written...

That was really cool. A great quick read.

Short and abrupt... could do with a lot more development. Ending more than anything.

2435832
Thanks for the comment. This was written about 2 years ago, and I agree. Most of my work falls far below "acceptable" for me, although by that I mean "things I can be proud enough to say I gave them my all at". It was an idea I had rattling around in my brain, and morphed from poetic imagery to adventure, and I don't think it ever really quite bridged to two smoothly, and came to an abrupt end. If I thought I could rewrite it better, I would, but to do that I need motivation. I let it stand as a fun little piece, not everything needs to be an epic or to be swathed in perfection. That's what these early pieces are for; as exercises to hone skill.

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