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A dumb-as-rocks changeling who should have been caught by now. (Avatar done by Zemer .)

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The Griffon Empire is startled when the Queen of the Changelings herself literally shows up at their doorstep. Rather than start up trouble though, she allowed them to capture her. Confused by her strange gesture of obedience, the Grand Commander sees it fit to question her thoroughly to find out what she is doing in their Empire. If anything, it shouldn't be a problem.

After all, she's locked in a room with him.

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AHAHA! Wow, I honestly didn't expect that the dispelling rod would 'dispel' the properties of the inhibitor ring. And after that... well, it's Queen Chrysalis, there was only one way it could've ended. And there's no Cadance and Shining to save them. Have a like and fav.

5814504 I believe the inhibitor ring is a bunch of magic disrupting magic. That's why it canceled out.

5814844 I know, but I didn't connect the dots until it actually happened.

Apparently the chief of staff of the Griffon army is too important to actually read the instruction manual for the stuff he uses.

Welp, they told us in training that not learning everything about how to operate our equipment safely could get us killed, and they weren't lying!

Wow im starting to think chrylasis is the ultimate badass. Well sort of

Bravo sir Bravo. Though you confuse you're with your two three times.

6972488 (Grabs a quill) One moment. :)

Thanks for pointing it out.

6973310 Anytime. I hugely like Queen Chrysalis and I find it ironic how people will skyrocket fics like Celestia pwning ass while things like this remain hidden in obscurity. Seems like the "hero" gets too much attention imho.

6973460 I always want to write stories about her, but I can never figure out what to write about.

6973499 Well I could give you some ideas if you so desire. In any case we need a bit more diabolous ex machina and less deus ex machina.

6973509. It sounds interesting. Let's talk about over PM and see where we go from there.

What if I have a plan of attack that will commence the minute I’m slain?

Then he will have one dangerous enemy less.

She continued. “Are you so certain that I didn’t plant imposters here?”

Poke her eye out. Infiltrator would revel h[im|er]self with extremely high probability.

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