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The Lutece twins


I think I am done with creating stories, just don't have that drive anymore nor the creative juices. but hey, continue to read my stories to you're hearts content

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Heavy & Medic, two people that worked together ever since they met each other. Heavy was also Medic's first test subject of his Uber charge as well. Heavy on the other hand, protects Medic. But what would happen if one day while they were facing their enemy's & they test out a new type of teleporter that they find, get transported to a world of technicolor-ed ponies, & find themselves tuned into ponies? Some major confusion, & good comedy.

Chapters (2)
Comments ( 33 )

Its starting out good but try and take your time think and plan out what you want also when you get ten chapters out id advise to go back and revise them and put more detail in them

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This is good ,need more

its fun but you need to clean it up. If you like I can give it a quick once over and make it flow a little easier. Its clear you are not very good with this but its no reason to be disheartened I enjoy a good story and the Heavy is my all time favorite character in TF2

Medic groggily looked about and his eyes settled at the ground to see that Instead of hands, he had hooves. Touching his head in the sheer pacing of panic he felt that he also had a horn.

"EEEEEAAAAAAAAAAAHHHH!!!" The new unicorn's scream was loud and filled with a somewhat odd mix of terror, confusion, and in general amusement. Hooves clopping to the top of his head, eyes wide his mouth parted again.

"What has happened to me! Warum Ich ein Einhorn!!".

"Hey, You okay there sugarcube!?" A certain rather rustic voice came to him from just beyond his peripheral vision. Medic quickly turned towards the voice to see two small pastel colored horses staring at him, ponies. A orange one with a stetson hat, and a purple unicorn staring at him with far more emotion that what a normal equine could.

"EEEEEAAAAAHHHHH!!!!!" Medic's slightly delayed reaction yet again left the two pony's ears ringing. Shaking his head in disbelief he muttered. "Ich glaube, ich werde verrückt!!!" His mind going native once more before the surge of oddity overpowered him and very much unlike the structured if not rather untrustworthy German mercenary, Medic fainted.

5792418 thank you, i will try to and make more chapters.

Pretty good!I can't wait for the next chapter!!

5793136 thank you. :twilightsmile: it'll take a little time, but i will make sure that i will have it done soon.

The only way this could get better comedy-wise that I can see is if Heavy wakes up and destroys the barn. Also, there is already a fic like this: Waking Nightmares by KnightMysterio.

Well, I say like this, but it's kinda different. The principal of TF2 characters being shunted to Equestria via some means is the same. :twilightsmile:

5793702 i can do that, were medic, applejack, & twilight go into the house & talk, & heavy wakes up screams & destroys the barn by accident. :derpytongue2:

I've noticed something... An very distinct lack of... What was it again?
Ah yes.

Hats.

Hiatus?

Also...This story seem promising but seem to be missing something.

6473933 it means to come back at a later time. And let me guess, hats?

6474042 That too, but I'm talking about something else...

I'm listening to a large variety of music to get the idea but so far nothing come to me...the current one is this...

By Living Tombstone and ...Dasha, I think?

Ich glaube, ich werde verrückt

He thinks he's just now going crazy

7267798 I will when I get a chance, I'm trying to finish my bartender's moon and another chapter of Toriel in Equestria.

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Mmm hmmmm...................................

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Is there? I'm asking cause it's been a year hello from 2018

Ok, a failing point on your part is not researching quite as well as you should. Heavy is NOT a dumb individual, as evidenced by his doctorate in Russian literature. Which, in all honesty, makes him more of a doctor than the Medic.

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this was way before i knew heavy wasn't dumb and all that, so sorry about that

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