Rainbow Dash has a problem and Rarity is going to fix it.
Edited 8/2/15
Chapters (1)
alt-tap
Joined 1st Feb, 2012 ·
Offline
Also LikedSimilarAuthor
- Cold in Gardez · 11k words · 3,246 57 · 82k views
- PonyThunder · 4k words · 526 5 · 7.2k views
- AuroraDawn · 10k words · 872 21 · 20k views
- Alaborn · 4.1k words · 716 16 · 7.4k views
- The 24th Pegasus · 4k words · 383 8 · 4.5k views
- Palm Palette · 4.8k words · 225 3 · 3k views
- Crowne Prince · 1.5k words · 219 3 · 4.7k views
- Titanium Dragon · 25k words · 766 26 · 10k views
Featured In1
Join our SubscribeStar to remove these adverts!
Join our SubscribeStar to remove these adverts!
Stats
Page generated in 0.075 seconds
Total duration
758 users online
615,358 hits today, 1,996,409 yesterday
FIMFiction
My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic Fanfiction
Designed and coded by knighty & Xaquseg - © 2011-2024
Follow & Support Us
Support us
SubStar
Chat!
Discord
Follow us
Twitter
MLP: Friendship is Magic® - © 2024 Hasbro Inc.®
Fimfiction is in no way affiliated with or endorsed by Hasbro Inc.®
Wreck It Dash, and Fixity? Let's see what we got here. :3
Well, that was random. The whole having kids thing. Is this a Kirala universe thing?
Anyways, that was weird, but when we finally get to the whole Rainbow Dash foalhood crush it really started to pick up. Very cute. <3
I don't know what "Kirala" is, but thanks for the comments!
Silly Rainbow Dash
Umm... no. The narrative shouldn't ever use first-person pronouns unless the narrator is a character in the story.
5960471 the narrator is Rainbow Dash. I had thought I'd made that sufficiently clear. Did I not?
5960995
So Rainbow Dash is narrating in both third and first person?
5961466 If you read the whole thing you'll notice her trying to hide the fact that she's the narrator. I know I made that obvious.